Switch Theme:

A Decade too late  [RSS] Share on facebook Share on Twitter Submit to Reddit
»
Author Message
Advert


Forum adverts like this one are shown to any user who is not logged in. Join us by filling out a tiny 3 field form and you will get your own, free, dakka user account which gives a good range of benefits to you:
  • No adverts like this in the forums anymore.
  • Times and dates in your local timezone.
  • Full tracking of what you have read so you can skip to your first unread post, easily see what has changed since you last logged in, and easily see what is new at a glance.
  • Email notifications for threads you want to watch closely.
  • Being a part of the oldest wargaming community on the net.
If you are already a member then feel free to login now.




Made in us
Slaanesh Havoc with Blastmaster





A lone warrior clad in dark armor crawled out from under the wreckage of a raider. For 20 years it lay immobile, collecting dust, frozen in time. Signs of a battle fought two decades ago were all around him. Dead, lifeless bodies were strewn across the bay, their flesh preserved as if frozen. The warrior cracked his neck, then took off his helmet and dropped it to the floor. It clanked as it echoed through the bay. Straight black bangs fell concealing his eyes as his long pointed ears protruded out of his hair.

He made his way over rubble and grunted at the soreness of his bones. He felt weak and exhausted, and the thoughts of food dominated his mind. He wanted to lay down but he realized it wasn't the best of ideas. Instead he knelt and tried to collect his thoughts.

"What, happened?" he asked himself. He surveyed the bay once more. He had fought in this battle. He remembered when his ship took a lance hit and went down. He remembers the crash. Then he remembered the gas. The gas, then nothing.

"The gas."

"The gas" a voice said from behind.

"Lokio, I thought you were dead." He turned to see his long time brother who he had fought with for as long as he could remember.

"Not quite, I thought the same for you, Jurn, when your raider went down." He gestured to the wreckage Jurn had crawled out from under. It was lifeless, something that had so much power and strength was now covered in ash and dust. Jurn eyed the dead flopped over the craft. He saw Berjn and Kalis. Kalis was ironically impaled by one of their own spears that had other trophies on it. Berjn had no identifiable cause of death, besides trauma.

"We could bring them back to life," Lokio said as he saw Jurn eyeing his dead brethren.

"No." was all he said then turned back to Lokio.

"Are there any others? Any others awakening?"

"Well I found HER" Lokio putting the emphasis on HER.

"Her?" Jurn's face looked confused at first then he understood what he meant. The bitch they once served. The one who got them into this mess, this massive firefight. She tried to ditch them, to leave them as they fought on. She set the entire fight up for a place at Vect's side. To destroy both Kabals. She killed Berjn and Kalis and the others.

Jurn bit one of his lip rings as if deep in thought. Then he bit harder and harder until he started to bleed. The black blood dripping onto the metallic floor reminding him he was a clone. He looked up at Lokio who was handing him one of his knives.

Jurn took the blade and stood up.

"Is SHE alive though?" he asked truely concerned.

Lokio shrugged, his bald head and sunken eyes his prominent features.

"She was the only reason I lived." Jurn said, "I was with her from the beginning."

"I know Jurn. Come." Lokio gestured with his bald head, the two walked with fire in their hearts and eyes.

They made their way to what looked like a cliff face but i was made of the bay's metallic floor. The floor literally looked like an earthquake broke it apart in two. The sheer size of it was spectacular. Lokio knotted a rope that was hanging off the ledge into his belt. he turned then jumped off backwards, controlling himself with the rope. He controlled his descent until he reached the bottom, then unclipped himself.

Jurn clipped himself in and made his way down, fast. He hit the ground with a thud. He looked up at the top.

"You climbed up that?" Jurn asked.

"Yes." Lokio pointed with his knife to behind Jurn.

Jurn turned to see the bitch stuck under a piece of rubble. She was alive but quiet.

"We see you." Lokio said spitefully.

She turned to look at them. Her deep black eyes staring them down as if they were prey. The stare was replied with a kick to her head. It rattled as it smacked the rubble.

"Haha," Lokio laughed then put his blade to her cheek, and sniped it.

Violet blood ran down her cheek.

"You see, her blood is different than ours." Jurn spoke softly.

"Yes. It is." Lokio said making another cut on her other cheek.

"We should make her smile. She isn't smiling like I remember." Lokio said.

Jurn looked at the blade in his hand, then thought of what he lived for.

"Wait Lokio."

Lokio turned with a raised eyebrow, "Wait?"

"She might know where Aerilia is."

There was laughter from the bloodied Archoness. "Aerilia?"

"Yes Aerilia!" Jurn moved to the incapicated Archoness and grabbed her face.
"That slut I fethed ten times?" Her voice sounded like needles scraping metal. It was full of nothing but spite and hatred.

Jurn hit her with his gauntlet-ed fist. Again, and again. Until he counted to ten.
"Where is she? Tell me and you die quickly."

"What she's not here?" The Archoness laughed, her entire face covered in violet blood.
Jurn stood up as Lokio took his place and began cutting her face again. Making her smile, permanently.

The Archoness stopped laughing when Lokio started taking her teeth out.

"Let me go and I'll tell you, clone" she managed to get out with the blade in her mouth.

Lokio stood up and looked at Jurn. Jurn walked back over to her and knelt in front of her.
He nodded, "What happened to her?"

"I sold her. To the Cult of Strife. She's to be a Wych. Or at least, training for Wyches." she snickered as blood poured out of her rotten mouth. She reminded him of what he wasn't. Trueborn. He was a clone and he was staring at one of his oppressors. Those who used his kind for their own bidding.

He slammed his blade under her chin and through her skull.

"You're free to go."

Spoiler:

Lokio(left) and Jurn(right) Make their way through the bay in search of other survivors


Sua Sponte 
   
Made in us
Decrepit Dakkanaut





Vallejo, CA

Shouldn't it be "tell my and you die slowly", rather than "or"?



Your one-stop website for batreps, articles, and assorted goodies about the men of Folera: Foleran First Imperial Archives. Read Dakka's favorite narrative battle report series The Hand of the King. Also, check out my commission work, and my terrain.

Abstract Principles of 40k: Why game imbalance and list tailoring is good, and why tournaments are an absurd farce.

Read "The Geomides Affair", now on sale! No bolter porn. Not another inquisitor story. A book written by a dakkanought for dakkanoughts!
 
   
Made in us
Slaanesh Havoc with Blastmaster





"Where is she? Tell me and you die quickly."


If this is what you are referring to I don't see any grammatical errors.

But anyway I hope you enjoyed reading it

Sua Sponte 
   
Made in us
Decrepit Dakkanaut





Vallejo, CA

Right.

They're dark eldar. Wouldn't they want their last few moments in life the be spent in the exquisite rush of excruciating pain?

Dying quickly would be sort of a let down



Your one-stop website for batreps, articles, and assorted goodies about the men of Folera: Foleran First Imperial Archives. Read Dakka's favorite narrative battle report series The Hand of the King. Also, check out my commission work, and my terrain.

Abstract Principles of 40k: Why game imbalance and list tailoring is good, and why tournaments are an absurd farce.

Read "The Geomides Affair", now on sale! No bolter porn. Not another inquisitor story. A book written by a dakkanought for dakkanoughts!
 
   
Made in gb
Mighty Vampire Count






UK

Enjoyed that - thanks - look forward to more

I AM A MARINE PLAYER

"Unimaginably ancient xenos artefact somewhere on the planet, hive fleet poised above our heads, hidden 'stealer broods making an early start....and now a bloody Chaos cult crawling out of the woodwork just in case we were bored. Welcome to my world, Ciaphas."
Inquisitor Amberley Vail, Ordo Xenos

"I will admit that some Primachs like Russ or Horus could have a chance against an unarmed 12 year old novice but, a full Battle Sister??!! One to one? In close combat? Perhaps three Primarchs fighting together... but just one Primarch?" da001

www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/528517.page

A Bloody Road - my Warhammer Fantasy Fiction 
   
Made in us
Slaanesh Havoc with Blastmaster





Spoiler:
Part 2, Please read and Enjoy





"I found Teira," said Lokio over the communicator.

"Alive?" asked Jurn holding his ear piece while lifting up scraps of metal and tossing them, trying to get to a bike that was underneath the rubble.

"Yeah.. "

"Something the matter?" Jurn asked with a raised eyebrow.

"She can't talk. Might be a side effect of the gas. She doesn't look all there either."

"All there?" Jurn asked grunting then ripping free the bike from the debris with screech of metal on metal.

"She keeps grinning manically at me"

"Maybe she likes you," he laughed then studied the jet bike.

"~You never were much of a talker were you??" Jurn heard Lokio say to Teira.

"feth!" Jurn shouted when he finally found a splinter lodged in one of the hydropressure gaskets. The only way to get the bike to start was to take out the entire vecular mass drive, and then reset the entire tubing and the gasket. The entire thing had leaked atomized energy through the entire muffler system. The bike was shot, to say the least.

"Hey, I don't think we should do that right now, I mean we got to find the others," Jurn realized he had not turned off his communicator, "Nah there's probably time,~~~Hey Teira-"

"Lokio, I was yelling at the bike,"

"Oh...~~would you stop grinning at me like that? Stop thinking those thoughts you!"

Jurn wiped his hair back from his eyes and sighed. Cracked his neck, then continued through the debris. So many were dead. He found it daunting that he was one of the few that actually lived. So far there were 3 survivors of the battle, when he had probably encountered 50 some dead bodies.

Where are my brothers?

"Jurn, Jurn is that you?" The familiar voice hit him with excitement. It was Malic's. Another clone he had fought with for the longest time.

"Malic? Malic where are you?" Jurn scanned around, quickly looking for his long time comrade.

"Here," Jurn looked to see him covered in rockcrete, his gauntlet-ed hand raised through it. As Jurn neared he saw the damage that was done to him. He saw his black beady eyes through his cracked lenses. His black blood dried on his armor making oil like stains.

"Malic..." He said when he neared. Jurn then started removing the rubble from him, then helped him up.

"What happened?" he said then grunted when Jurn picked him up.

"That was your jet bike back there wasn't it? The one with a splinter lodged in it."

"She was mine." He coughed then looked at Jurn through his broken lens, "What happened Jurn?"

"We were gassed,"

"Gassed?" he coughed, "here set me down, my legs can't hold me much longer."

Jurn put him down just like he asked. He tried looking at his leg but with no medical training Jurn was somewhat useless, as well as his armor being on it was impossible to tell what was wrong with him.

"Lokio, I found Malic." Jurn said.

"You did? Where was he?" Lokio asked.

"Sector 1, near the blast doors."

"Jurn.." Malic said softly, but Jurn was too focused on Lokio to bother.

"Me and smiles will head that way now. How was it getting over there?"

"The terrian-"

"Jurn!"

Jurn turned to see three kabalite trueborns from the Kabal of the Barbed Heart. Each had their splinter rifles transfixed on him and Malic.

"You should have never woke up." one said, "Drop your knife, or this toxin will melt you from the inside out."

"I have a dart loaded that will make your reproductive organs pop." another said.

Jurn dropped his knife. It clanked on the floor.

"That one is broken. Look at him." one of the trueborns said.

"He has no functioning legs. He is of no use to us. Except for pain"

"Power from pain."

"He knows how to repair light skimmers and jet bikes." Jurn spat out quickly.

"He can fix our raider," one whispered.

Malic laughed, "I'll fix your mother."

Jurn turned at Malic with a glare. A trueborn grabbed Jurn and threw him down quickly. He didn't even see the trueborn move. They were fast.

"Your mouth will get you no where. I see you are resistant. That's fine." Another trueborn said and picked Malic up by the throat effortlessly, "But our craft is damage, so suffice you will live until it is fixed. Then you will suffer, and I then I will cherish the nectar of your pain."

"feth you," Malic wheezed out of his constricted throat.

"Kaen, bring the other over."

Jurn was pulled by the top of his neck like a helpless dog. Then dropped in front of Malic.

"Look at him." The leader said, "He extended your lifespan, so he must have some sort of care for you. Weakness only found in clones..."
Jurn felt the barel of a splinter rifle rest agaisnt the back of his head.

"Refuse, and I let Kaen melt his reproductive systems."

"I'll repair your craft."

"I know you will." The leader said then dropped him to ground.

Sua Sponte 
   
 
Forum Index » Dakka Fiction
Go to: