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Made in us
Dangerous Outrider




Maine USA

I wanted to let all you great folk at Dakka Dakka that Dark Pony Painting has launched it's first website, thus moving from primarily our blog and website instead of Facebook, though we'll still be using facebook! Thank you all for your support and please come check us out!

http://darkponypainting.weebly.com/

This message was edited 2 times. Last update was at 2014/06/03 19:08:22


 
   
Made in ca
Shas'ui with Bonding Knife





Toronto, Canada

I was just flipping through your website and noticed quite a bit of grammar mistakes, which kind of throws off the professionalism.

Throughout every page of the site you use the word "it's" (should be just "its"). In this case the apostrophe makes it "it is" - it doesn't add ownership.

Also under the artist section the following sentence: " His style prefer is that of clean and Grunge and...." - Should be "preference".

That aside, cool site and good luck

   
Made in gb
Dipping With Wood Stain






England

I'm willing to do a thorough proofread and offer suggestions on the text for your site if you want, send me a PM if you're interested.

(I really shouldn't do this, but it's a personal bugbear of mine and I'm loving your fairly "metro" design style otherwise for the website so I'm willing to do it.)



DR:80+S+GM++B+I++Pw40k07#-D+A+/mWD300R+T(M)DM+ 
   
Made in in
[MOD]
Otiose in a Niche






Hyderabad, India

So long as we're all offering free advice, yeah police your grammer 'it's' is a common mistake but that was the first thing I noticed.

Going to your site the first thing I saw was a very nice b&w photo of a seascape...

And not a picture of your painting.

I have to scroll down for that. Your initial post also should have some examples to get people to click through.

Finally your sig should be a link to your sevice and showcase your painting skills, as interesting as your deep personal connection to Rainbow Dash may be it's not what you're looking to market.

Best of luck!


 
   
Made in us
Dangerous Outrider




Maine USA

Thank you so much for all the advice guys! We have our editor looking through it today to get that fixed.

@ Kid_Kyoto

Yeah we're still waiting on our new camera to get here :(
   
 
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