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I just posted these in the gallery but here are some more pics of it as well.

Cool - looks good - I have a Knight aligned to my Sisters army as well

It's a good effort, and the color scheme is cool, but there's a lot to improve upon here.
Some CC to follow, but that's why we come here.

1. I'm not sure what you were going for with the blue outlines around the panels/filigree spots on the model. Possibly work a little more on your freehand lining.
2. Something about the construction of the model's right shoulder pad looks off. Is it crooked? (3rd picture)
3. A lot of the drybrushing looks really sloppy. In fact, there looks like too much drybrushing.
4. Drill out the heavy stubber barrel. It's the little details that can go a long way.
5. The base would look great with some tufts of grass or some spots of static grass, like a marsh or swamp area.

I'm no expert, but I've built and painted 9x knights to this point, so take my criticism for what you will!

Keep it up!

Ah good eye there HG the shoulders are magnetized on and i guess i bumped it and it slanted a bit but it fits normally. As for the blue i do need to work on the highlighting but i wanted the paintscheme to be true to how the sisters of battle are painted. A huge gambit i know if i cleaned up the highlights it would have looked better. What parts of dry brushing are you talking about are over done? I wanted to go for a very well used but decently kept knight look to it. How could I have done better?


staring collage again I'm a bit short on funds so i won't be able to get any grass or a drill for the stubber for a while but i will keep those in mind to fix them for later. Thank you for the insight

I don´t get what that blue lines are about, it really distracts the eye (at least mine). I guess the rest is fine but I really can´t tell because of all the blue xD
The dry brushing might be overdone but in my opinion it doesn´t look that bad at all.

You might consider painting a black dot instead of actually drilling a hole, it´ll improve the look too.

The blue is to keep it the same paint scheme as the sisters of battle. I might go back with some abaddon black and thin out the highlighting a lot.