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As a 13-year old, I have a hobby of writing books, novels, short stories, you name it. Now, call me crazy or dumb, it's okay, but writing is what I do on my free time, together with Warhammer.

So, the 2 latest plots I've come up with are:

1. A grudge between the US and Russia turns into an all out war, when Russia starts to bomb US military bases in Europe from space, and the US responds by doing the same thing at Russia.
The story follows the victims of a bombing in Stockholm, where a group of people live in the ruins of what used to be T-Cewntralen, a metro station. They need to defend themselves from US and RUssian forces, at the same time as the threat of another bombardment.

The 'bombardment' here are 40 meter long tungsten rods attached to several satellites orbiting around earth. When dropped, they can hit their target with surprising accuracy at the speed of Mach 10 (3430 m/s), making them impossible to stop. The destructive force would only be about a tenth of an atomic bomb, but it would create a huge crater, create local eartquakes, and mess up the lifes of everyone around it. If only 5 or 6 of those were dropped at a major city like Stockholm, most of it would be gone or in ruins.

2. Now, this one is a fantasy story (I really like writing fantasy, I consider that to be my 'specialty'.), about a mountain. Yeah, it might sound dumb, but bear with me. SO, a guy named Jadeiron lives on this mountain, hunts animals, collects roots and herbs and such for a village not so far from said mountain. One day, the mountain 'opens up', and becomes a sort of portal to hell. Thousands of demonic warriors made of ice pour out and threaten the Kingdoms safety. A guy named Kithron, banned from the village, former soldier in the army, is forced to join up with Jadeiron to fight these demons of ice. The plot twist is that somewhere in the middle, Jadeiron realises that he's the one who opened the portal, he's the one who unleashed the warriors on his country. When the mountain erupts in flames and becomes a volcano, he ends up killing himself, sacrificing his life, so the portal to hell can be shut, and the ice warriors die.

Any ideas? Constructive critizism only, please.

Ice dudes from a volcano?

 CptJake wrote:
Ice dudes from a volcano?

Yeah, I was reeeaaally tired when I came up with that. I wanted some kind of demon, without making them too stereotypical.


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