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hey guys posted my list last night from army builder and people didnt like how it was typed up so heres the same list without all the stats and upgrades. please let me know whatcha think

hq kharne the betrayer
9 khorne bezerkers
in a land raider

3 chaos terminators

1 heldrake

5 raptors deep striking

5 chaos space marines in a rhino

any and all help is appreciated thanks for looking

List looks cool.

You aren't listing your special weapons, which makes it a bit tricky to see what each unit is doing.

Dirge casters on the raider would be a good idea. There is a legacy of ruin upgrade which improves the range which could help. Also would add a banner of wrath I think.

You can probably manage without a full unit of zerkers

You're going to be open for an alpha strike. If you are going to do this, I would suggest not deep striking the raptors and keeping everything together, the rhino, landraider, and raptors. Make your opponent choose his medicine. If you spread everything out you will lose first blood.