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I am normally a guy who plays lots of marines and minimal characters I am trying something out.

HQ
Librarian w/terminator armor, shield
Librarian bare

Troops
5 Tacticals, Rhino, Missile launcher
5 Tacticals, Rhino, Missile launcher
5 Tacticals, Rhino, Missile launcher

Elite
5x Honor Guard
Land Raider

Fast Attack
2x Storm Talon with skyhammer

Heavy Support
Centurion Squad, 2 Grav, 1 Las with omni
5x devs with 4 lascannons

Lord of War
Papa Smurf himself


Goal is that smurf and the honor go with a librarian in the landraider. Terminator librarian goes with the centurion squad.

Thoughts?

drop the honor guard make both cen squads 3 man, make one libarian Tigerius. Take 3 pods. Also drop the land raider
With left over points see if you can take the skyhammer formation

sadly i dont have any more cents. or pods. I have more marines, devs, preds, dreds.

I think you would consider making 2 of those Tac squads arming flamers and the last one arming meltas. The rest of your list is ok in taking heavy vehicles, elite units, and MCs short of WK spams. But you lack anti horde ability. Especially lack of ignore cover weapons, so your trouble maybe a 30 strong termagant in ruin backed by a venomthrope. If you can get a TFC, it will be way better.