Looks good, just a few recommendations:
-Assault Termies, while cool models, aren't really that good. I would drop them and replace them with another DC unit (also, give them Jump Packs)
-I would also drop your Chaplain, just compensate for the lack of hatred with more blood-crazed lunatics
-Instead of bringing your Tac Squads in Stormravens, consider Razorbacks with Lascannon & TL Plasma Gun turrets. Since BA Razorbacks are fast, you can move up the whole 12" and throw a Lascannon and TL Plasma shot at the enemy.
-With the Tactical squads in Razorbacks, I would still keep one Stormraven, purely for anti-air purposes. With the points used for the other, you can take a couple of fast Vindicators. They can move up 12" and lob a S10, AP2, Ordnance pie plate in your enemy's face.
-In a competitive scenario, you want Jump Packs on your Assault Marines. Drop pods can bring them in closer to their target, but it means that they won't have the mobility to catch up with whatever they may be shooting at or to get away from what may be shooting back at them
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