Great start there. As others have said. Your brush work is neat and you seem to thin the paint which are both key to painting at this sort of scale. You asked for crit so I will say a couple of things you could take on board for the next mini
- Scrape off all mould lines and flash. It is always a pity to see a well painted mini let down when this step is ignored. I use the edge of my scalpel for light work and liquid
GS and very fine sand paper for when things get tough.
- Buy a very very small brush. You will find it invaluable for painting eye lenses and other insanely small detail. Have a look at this page (Scroll down a bit) for a great technique to paint lenses.
http://www.librarium-online.com/forums/projects/163704-petes-various-projects-18.html
- Try using transfers. After painting. brush on some gloss varnish to the area you want to add the decal and let it dry thoroughly. Apply the decal then with a clean brush, carefully brush on some Micro Sol to soften and conform the decal to the surface. After this is dry, add another layer of gloss varnish. I suggest thinning the gloss varnish down a little as it is often quite thick and can quickly start to obscure detail.
- Matt coating the mini. At 28mm gloss or just looks wrong. Personally I always use acrylic matt varnish spray for paintings. You can pick up a huge can for not much. I have never had any problems with frosting or unwanted shininess that I sometimes got with the likes of Tamiya matt spray. The brand I use is Pebeo Matt Picture Varnish.
I look forward to seeing more.
Cheers, Vim