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Made in gb
Mindless Spore Mine












I'm new here, so if I do something wrong please tell me 
   
Made in ca
Longtime Dakkanaut





Hey man nice work and if you are telling the tru about your sig I can drop some tips.


But you never asked what you want from us. Do you want critque? Comments? Complements or other? Legion idenity?

I need to go to work every day.
Millions of people on welfare depend on me. 
   
Made in gb
Mindless Spore Mine





Critique and comments.

I'm new here, so if I do something wrong please tell me 
   
Made in us
Fickle Fury of Chaos




Bangor, ME

I guess I just don't know what's going on here. Not trying to be negative but it seems quite messy. The axe I can see some edge highlighting in blues. You should consider cleaning up the model before painting, (scraping mold lines, sanding down the clipping points, like the big one on his shoulder and backpack.) If your not already thin your paints a bit, multiple coats of thinned paint always looks waaay better than a big thick coat. I am unsure if you used a shade or wash on the model. The chest plate is very flat, I've painted this model before and he has a bunch of doodads and trinkets and little spikes and whatever other chaos stuff you can think of. He is very red, if you put a wash over the model and took 2 or 3 shades of red and worked from darkest to lightest you could add alot of depth to your models. Like I said before, I am definitely not trying to be a grumpy Gus and slam ya with a bunch of negative, I just want to help by pointing out room for improvement. I see your profile is brand spankin new so this could be your first model ever, I have no idea. Don't get discouraged and keep painting. Just as a basic learning route look up warhammer TV on YouTube. They have a gakload of tutorials and show you step by step on painting models to a good tabletop standard. If you have any questions you can ask me here or send me a PM. I'd be more than happy to help in any way I can.
   
Made in us
Regular Dakkanaut





how old are you? also is there a local shop near you that you can get to

My trader feedback on other websites

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http://www.ebay.com/usr/questionmarks
 
   
Made in gb
Mindless Spore Mine





He didn't exactly turn out to plan. I'm also not particularly interested in mould lines etc.

I'm new here, so if I do something wrong please tell me 
   
 
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