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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2016/05/10 11:25:52
Subject: Space Marine Stormhawk Interceptor by Just. Painting Studio
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Doomed Slave
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This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2016/05/10 11:26:15
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2016/05/10 15:24:16
Subject: Space Marine Stormhawk Interceptor by Just. Painting Studio
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The Marine Standing Behind Marneus Calgar
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I’m not a fan of the style, but you executed it quite well. Lovely tones of color.
My one issue is that it’s very monotonous, which is an overall problem with space marines in general. Could have used a little more accent color somewhere IMHO. Not sure where though.
Again, nice work!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2016/05/10 19:09:45
Subject: Space Marine Stormhawk Interceptor by Just. Painting Studio
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I like it alot. I've been trying to work out how to tackle my crimson fist stormtalon, and I think you have given me a few ideas. Cheers.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2016/05/10 19:14:59
Subject: Re:Space Marine Stormhawk Interceptor by Just. Painting Studio
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Douglas Bader
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IMO the exaggerated shading of the hull doesn't go well with the flat and realistic metal parts. Pick one style and use it for the whole model.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2016/05/10 21:20:17
Subject: Space Marine Stormhawk Interceptor by Just. Painting Studio
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Stalwart Space Marine
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I like the final effect, looks really good  This model is my next "musthave"
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2016/05/10 22:46:55
Subject: Space Marine Stormhawk Interceptor by Just. Painting Studio
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Stabbin' Skarboy
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Beautiful colour but i'm distracted by the ultra marine symbol on the nose, is it just me or is it crooked
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2016/05/11 05:16:10
Subject: Space Marine Stormhawk Interceptor by Just. Painting Studio
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Huge Hierodule
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Fantastic
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2016/05/11 07:05:34
Subject: Space Marine Stormhawk Interceptor by Just. Painting Studio
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Perfect Shot Dark Angels Predator Pilot
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I really like what you've done here, but the base is a little too dark for me, looks pretty good tho. Also, since you've got a relatively dark model, the White canopy is too bright and is quite distracting.
Other than that, love it!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2016/05/11 08:33:44
Subject: Space Marine Stormhawk Interceptor by Just. Painting Studio
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Stern Iron Priest with Thrall Bodyguard
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Agree with SixT4Pixels about the dark tone -A spot of red there and you would have a crimson fist aircraft
All in all though, the model looks great. A bit monotone, but that and the dark tone give it kind of a sneaky stealth feel that would fit nicely with the theme of the flyer.
Only problem is the sad base. It looks like you took about 2 minutets to put it together and paint, and it makes the monotone look of the flyer come out as lazy and rushed rather than part of a concept.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2016/05/11 19:22:16
Subject: Re:Space Marine Stormhawk Interceptor by Just. Painting Studio
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I like it overall, but there are a few issues:
- The most glaring one is that you put the rear wing backwards. The flaps are supposed to be rear facing.
- For such a well painted model, the base needs some sprucing up.
- The model is very well painted but those highlights are generally placed where there is light and reflections from that light. No doubt it looks amazing, but where is the light source coming from?
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2016/05/12 04:02:56
Subject: Space Marine Stormhawk Interceptor by Just. Painting Studio
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Devestating Grey Knight Dreadknight
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That is some great highlighting on the edges and the color reminds me of the ocean.
I want to see it based on a water base now, were it would almost be camouflaged from above.
I really like it.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2016/05/12 08:13:24
Subject: Re:Space Marine Stormhawk Interceptor by Just. Painting Studio
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Doomed Slave
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Mdlbuildr wrote:I like it overall, but there are a few issues:
- The most glaring one is that you put the rear wing backwards. The flaps are supposed to be rear facing.
- For such a well painted model, the base needs some sprucing up.
- The model is very well painted but those highlights are generally placed where there is light and reflections from that light. No doubt it looks amazing, but where is the light source coming from?
Wow I just noticed issue with rear wings, it doesn't have anything common with aerodynamics but now it look better IMO.
Quickjager wrote:That is some great highlighting on the edges and the color reminds me of the ocean.
I want to see it based on a water base now, were it would almost be camouflaged from above.
I really like it.
As a camouflage it would look great, you're right but would be to monotonous :(
Fayric wrote:Agree with SixT4Pixels about the dark tone -A spot of red there and you would have a crimson fist aircraft
All in all though, the model looks great. A bit monotone, but that and the dark tone give it kind of a sneaky stealth feel that would fit nicely with the theme of the flyer.
Only problem is the sad base. It looks like you took about 2 minutets to put it together and paint, and it makes the monotone look of the flyer come out as lazy and rushed rather than part of a concept.
I am not a huge fan of bases with tons of details especially on TT+ models, IMO that distract from the model... but not at all cases  I used to make hyper-contrast lava bases on chaos models.
SixT4Pixels wrote:I really like what you've done here, but the base is a little too dark for me, looks pretty good tho. Also, since you've got a relatively dark model, the White canopy is too bright and is quite distracting.
Other than that, love it!
Thanks, I belive that without that white monotony canopy...model would look very monotonous
FeindusMaximus wrote:Fantastic
Zognob Gorgoff wrote:Beautiful colour but i'm distracted by the ultra marine symbol on the nose, is it just me or is it crooked
Painted from custom made template using decal sheet so I thinks it's correct
Desaxe wrote:I like the final effect, looks really good  This model is my next "musthave" 
True, great model!
Peregrine wrote:IMO the exaggerated shading of the hull doesn't go well with the flat and realistic metal parts. Pick one style and use it for the whole model.
I like to mix realistic looking/weathered parts with unrealistic shading like that:
JamesY wrote:I like it alot. I've been trying to work out how to tackle my crimson fist stormtalon, and I think you have given me a few ideas. Cheers.
Nevelon wrote:I’m not a fan of the style, but you executed it quite well. Lovely tones of color.
My one issue is that it’s very monotonous, which is an overall problem with space marines in general. Could have used a little more accent color somewhere IMHO. Not sure where though.
Again, nice work!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2016/05/13 10:53:44
Subject: Re:Space Marine Stormhawk Interceptor by Just. Painting Studio
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Bounding Assault Marine
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Very well executed shading mate , well done. As for everyone saying it looks odd or weird, I look forward to their better submissions of this model
Striking and well done.
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