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Made in ca
Hardened Veteran Guardsman





Calbi,Terra

Deep in the Jalkim system, was a minor raid on a Human settlement. After a crashed space hulk landed on a planet. Although eye witnesses were rather off. One old man said that they were orks. The orks attacked this renegade settlement with there bare hands and soon grabbed hold of some auto weapons after the raid. The local militia commander hesitated with his decision. Has a new ork tribe just descended on our planet? Or is this a small scale invasion. He looked at his most trusted commander's lined up near him. Most looked shocked that orks have attacked there homelands and massacred there loyal subjects. The commander returned to looking at the old man with a new plan on his mind. "We will dispatch the PDF. Hopefully they will mop up what mess lies ahead of us..." The commander finds his advisers praying to there god as he finished the sentence...

Da Skotz are a ork klan bent on destroying the human race. Although backwards in certain areas of the universe. They thrive on the rattle of a well built shoota. The thud of a massive kannon and the krackle of a kustom blasta. These orks worship there Warboss Grubar Da SkullCraka because of how he is the reason why these orks enjoy there war machines. The massive amounts of teef that they come by makes them a very rich clan. So rick that they could afford a stompa... Twice But when there is no shoota to grab in the heat of the battle. Da Skotz Love the wet crunch a choppa makes as it makes its way into a space marines skull. Or a guardsmen shoulder. These orks thrive on charging and shooting wildly into the enemies battle lines. With both slugga and shoota.

Backstory:

These orks came from a faraway renegade system known as the Jalkim System. Where the Great Victorian Iron Men have taken refuge from the imperiums might. They attacked a local farming settlement with there bare hands. 30 orks destroyed the settlement and burned it to the ground. After they made do with scraps of metal and farming equipment. They have made primitive melee weapons and have reforged the militia auto weapons. In a mere 20 hours. The entire planet was burned. The PDF has been completely slaughtered along with the governor of the planet. And in a mere month. the entire Jalkim system belonged to the Skotz. The entire system wiped out. As they grew to power. It attracted the attention of a certain large figure within the neighborhood. Another renegade system hired some mercenary army to attack the ork controlled system. And rescue any survivors. Once they arrived. They were slammed by thousands of orks in the mere hour.


The merc's realized what tactics they used. As they descended form ork invaded worlds. Mostly coming from Armageddon After another year of fighting. The mercenaries retreated from the system. With only a handful of rescued civilians. This outraged the renegade faction. But the Skotz responded with a raid on there system. With over 10,000,000 orks. The renegade system fell. Which attracted the attention of the imperium. Now the orks attack the imperium. But are being repulsed contently. They still fight, for Gork and Mork!

As they grew in the system they finally set there eyes on a new planet in the system. Far from what there scanners and grots scout ships could pick up, It was Tiberium. Before a full on engagement was planned. A tip-of-the-spear forward attack part. A small space hulk which managed to cram over 10,000 orks. As they ran out of the crashed space hulk. They seen that the planet was being scorched already by Chaos and Space Wolf armies. But that was odd the orks thought. The scanners said nothing was found on the orbit except for scrap human ships. But that never stopped these orks from getting a good scrappin' before there time is up. Soon after the orks were defeated the next week. Which gave the main attack party enough time to reach orbit and crash into the surface. Soon after several hundred battles and seven years of war. The entire planet exploded via exterminatus.



Most orks prefer that the more bitz of there fallen enemies are a good way of showing there pride of battle than hauling what they slay on there backs. This could simple range from a severed head or a shoulder plate of a space marine to a entire corpse of a human and or space marine.

Facepaint takes a role in this clan too. As it was shown that the bluer you are. The more killin' could be done. As Grubar says.

More will be added later. But for now, this is the best i could write... And yes, my spelling is off, mostly due to the reason that my spellcheck seems to have stopped working

This message was edited 3 times. Last update was at 2016/11/11 03:09:12


"We're not just going to shoot the bastards. We're going to cut out their living guts and use them to grease the treads of our tanks."
-The most imperial guard thing ever said.
The one rule I have in my threads: DONT TALK ABOUT THE ABRAMS.
That is it



 
   
Made in gb
Liberated Grot Land Raida






Northern Ireland

Well fair play for showing up. It's not perfect as I'm sure you're aware but you can only do your best and I'm all praise for the fact that you picked up your (no doubt proverbial) pen and put something on the (just as proverbial) page.

Not sure how much advice or criticism you would really like but for now I'll just say its a good start and keep writing.

Just as important is to keep reading. The more good writing you read the better you'll write yourself.

   
Made in no
Terrifying Doombull





Hefnaheim

Iron men? Reall gonna use that particular pice of fluff eh?
   
Made in ca
Hardened Veteran Guardsman





Calbi,Terra

 theCrowe wrote:
Well fair play for showing up. It's not perfect as I'm sure you're aware but you can only do your best and I'm all praise for the fact that you picked up your (no doubt proverbial) pen and put something on the (just as proverbial) page.

Not sure how much advice or criticism you would really like but for now I'll just say its a good start and keep writing.

Just as important is to keep reading. The more good writing you read the better you'll write yourself.



I try my best with the tools i have at the moment. I don't have spellcheck. And plus, i was trying my best to get through this so i could work on something else more important. But i appreciate the feedback

"We're not just going to shoot the bastards. We're going to cut out their living guts and use them to grease the treads of our tanks."
-The most imperial guard thing ever said.
The one rule I have in my threads: DONT TALK ABOUT THE ABRAMS.
That is it



 
   
 
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