You should consider the Blood Host Detachment instead of a Formation Detachment for your Army List.
This consists of a Slaughtercult Core and at least 1 Aux -- you have both solved already.
As for the CSM Daemonkin, they are not nearly as cost efficient as Bloodletters, and though 35pt vehicle Blood Tithe is good, you have better options for similar cost, such as Spawn. The CSM are not going to be effective without special weapons, and in general are a pretty heavy tax for a great Core Choice. Bloodletters are in this way superior to CSM for KDK because of their ability to Deep Strike and their being Fearless.
6 Bikes in your Gore Pack per Chaos Biker Choice is a bit much, especially since you didn't take the one thing that makes them really strong -- 2 Melta Guns.
The Slaughtercult gives lots of options which you neglected as well -- 2 Spawn choices are literally 32pts for a T5 3W walking Blood Tithe that your opponent HAS to deal with.
As for the Fist of the Gods CSM Formation, I'm not sold on it. Your Possessed come running out, the Vindicators are getting shot at T1 and T2 but the Predator is just a strange fit, being Autocannon and Lascannon sponsons.
You have plenty of melee threats, but you have nothing that can handle LoW or multiple LoW. At 2000pts you should expect to see LoW, and this list is going to struggle with a single Imperial Knight, let alone 2 or 3 of them -- or god forbid, a Wraithknight. How are you planning on dealing with these kinds of threats?
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