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Made in gb
Arch Magos w/ 4 Meg of RAM





Hello everyone, Mengel Miniatures and the Mortal Reams podcast are running a little fiction competition over on TGA (link: http://www.mengelminiatures.com/2016/10/the-endless-deserts-fiction-contest.html).

If you like writing and Warhammer, why not give it a shot? There's still a few days left to go! I happen to like writing too, and have recently entered. I thought I would share my story here - tell me what you think! :-)

Scarab
By Sam James
1000 words



Inferion ran his hand across the wall, brushing away the sand to reveal the glyphs and ancient inscriptions beneath. The meanings were lost on him, all except for one, his fingers traced its outline, a winged scarab raising a skull into the air.

The same image had haunted his dreams for months, sent him near delirious in his rituals, brought him across the Sour Sea to draw blades against the Blood Maiden, forced him to seek aide in the human town of Bétone, and at last, led him here to this necropolis.

Khorne has purpose for me here.

With him was Vorgax, a loyal Blood Warrior, and also a human from Bétone named El-Kanash. A wretched and pitiful creature but whose skills in alchemy and knowledge of these lands had been invaluable thus far. The alchemist was studying the hieroglyphs on the wall.

The sight angered Inferion, his thoughts darkened and filled with rage. He stepped forward and grabbed the man by the throat, lifting him off the ground.

'You can read these inscriptions?'

'No-no,' he spluttered, 'I have never seen the like-'

'Enough, my Priest,' said Vorgax, 'We may have need for him later.'

Inferion's anger quelled and he tossed the human aside, 'You are right. Pass me the bone dagger.'

Vorgax revealed an ivory blade and handed it to the Slaughterpriest. This was an ancient artefact of chaotic power.

Inferion returned to the wall and brought the ritual dagger to his palm. A stream of red ran river down his fingers which he poured over the hieroglyph of the scarab and skull. The blood channeled down inlaid canals that led unseen into the floor below.

'It is done,' Inferion said, 'my blood cannot be ignored. The necropolis will answer.'

A few moments passed before the wall trembled and began to sink into the ground, revealing the chamber beyond. Dust and cold air swirled out from the inky blackness.

The next chamber was shrouded in darkness save for a dais illuminated by a thin shaft of sunlight from above. A plinth in its centre held the scarab upright. It shimmered gold and held aloft a carved ruby skull. A thin bridge of sandstone led to the dais with unknowable depths plummeting either side.

This talisman is the scarab I seek.

A scuttling could be heard from the darkness and a moment later the shaft of sunlight caught the ridges of carapace as something climbed up onto the bridge and raced towards them.

'A Tomb Scorpion,' gasped El-Kanash as he backed away, ready to flee.

'Hold!' shouted Inferion, the power in his voice stopped the alchemist.

The Blood Warrior, Vorgax, charged the scorpion now entering the chamber and roared, 'Blood for the Blood God, Skulls for the Skull Throne!'

The Tomb Scorpion was a terrible construct of bone and metal. It reeked of Death-Magic. Vorgax came down upon it with his goreaxes in hand but like a viper the coiled tail lashed out and sunk its fang deep into his chest. The Blood Warrior managed one final swing of his axes, severing the end of the tail, before he collapsed onto the floor.

Rage flooded through Inferion. He moved in swinging his Wrath-hammer around his arm in long arcs before launching it at the Tomb Scorpion. The metal ball and chain punctured into the side of its carapace and caused it to stagger. He drew his Hackblade but the construct was lightening fast, it had already righted itself and was upon Inferion in a second. He parried the first strike of its pincers but the blade was cut cleanly in half as its vice-grip closed. The severed tail lashed out and bludgeoned his chest. He fell sprawling onto the flagstones, his vision pitching.

The Tomb Scorpion closed in once more but was stopped as the alchemist leapt onto its back and sunk deep a curved dagger. A screech sounded from the skull visage of the construct as it lost its balance. El-Kanash repeatedly stabbed his dagger into the carapace, screaming with terror, until the Tomb Scorpion ceased to move.

'You could be a servant of Khorne yet, alchemist,' said Inferion as he rose to his feet. 'Kindle the lantern and follow me.'

The scarab is mine.

The Slaughterpriest traversed the narrow stone bridge guided by the warm light of the lantern behind. As he ascended the first steps of the dais he wondered what plans his God might have for such a talisman. The Blood Maiden was a fool to question me.

He felt a sharp pain as a blade entered his back, he lashed out in fury but as the dagger twisted something dark and sickly took a hold of his muscles. Inferion fell onto the steps before feeling the blade puncture his back three more times. He turned and saw El-Kanash, his dagger dripping with blood. Inferion spat in anger, 'Khorne will not let this betrayal pass, human!'

The alchemist regarded him coldly, 'Your God does not care for your plight, Priest.'

He stepped over Inferion and for the first time beneath the cloying scents of sandalwood and other spices could be smelt something far darker. Inferion tried to lash out but his arms and legs were now wholly paralysed. He watched the dark-skinned man ascend the stairs and screamed in rage, 'My God led me here, fear his wrath, fool.'

'Believe it if you must,' said El-Kanash with a soft laugh, 'Now die quietly, you brute, my master requires your aid no more.'

Inferion's last few moments were those of agony. The poison coiled around his throat and lungs before strangling him in silence. His vision filled with blood as he watched the alchemist reach the dais and take the scarab from its plinth. He swaddled it in cloth before placing it in a satchel. A dark shadow flew over the Slaughterpriest and he saw a bird settle on the alchemist's shoulder.

A carrion bird of death...


So there we go, a bit of good ol' Sword & Sorcery. If you liked the story, why not shoot a comment over on TGA too ;-) http://www.tga.community/forums/topic/4229-fiction-contest-scarab/

Bye bye Dakkadakka, happy hobbying! I really enjoyed my time on here. Opinions were always my own :-) 
   
Made in gb
Steady Space Marine Vet Sergeant




England

Shivers went down my spine reading that Bottle. Good job!

I was never too great at English nor fiction writing in general, but I'll be sure to follow what else comes up on here. Maybe (if you haven't already) put this down on the Dakka Fiction section, hopefully some of the whizzes down there will whip something up for it (looking at you Ezra).

If you can't believe in yourself, believe in me! Believe in the Dakka who believes in you!  
   
Made in es
Brutal Black Orc




Barcelona, Spain

Chant of War.

By Vicent Martin Bonet.

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His blood was being hammered, his heart marking the frenetic rhythm.

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Screams, crashes, barely nothing was distinguishable.

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Only the rhythm of battle.

Warchanter Grostik, a hulking orruk of pure muscle and ignorance, clad in battered white and azure armor, wielded his sticks and rampaged across the field of dunes.
WAAAGH! Faceslasha had chance their way into this realm, and they were thankful for it. The opponents were rather durable.
Not that Grostik cared about it.
His legs sprinted to their limits, the tissue brought to its unnatural limit. His arms swung brutally as the stick connected with a skull: the bone cracked inmediately, a thousand smitereens sent flying. The other stick hammered and shattered the ribcage and was joined by the other arm as Grostik viciously finished the crushing.

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The cracking sounds drummed his ears, lasting several seconds after their vanishing. He jumped towards another enemy and obliterated it, its grin growing further as he began a guttural laugh.
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He saw a massive beast, its head human but the body not. He didn't care about its origins and went straight for the kill.
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Lurching forward, and ignoring the ranks of skeletons and companions, with a mighty bellow he rushed and crushed his stikks on the paws. CRACK! A finger broke and the beast yelled in pain.
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Noticing him, the angered beast counter attacked. Grostik squatted and the claws just graced the back of his head. He went onwards and delivered a crushing blow. CRACK! The forearm shattered, its outer structure getting twisted upon the dual impact. The beast was sent sideaways a bit as its screech almost defeaned the rhythm. Almost.

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The beast counterattacked. Grostik placed one of his arms as a reflexive defense and it was sent flying in a save cut. Blood splurged like a fountain but it didn't deter him. On the contrary, he grinned further and enjoyed the cacophony.

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Grabbing his lost arm, Grostik charged towards the beast again. This time a score of skelletons interposed itself in his way. He cared not, he simple swung his arms and added to the rhythm a shattering of bones. They had their stab, riding Grostik with holes and almost, ALMOST, driving him to his knees. But the rhythm kept him alive and laughing like a maniac. He hadn't enjoyed himself nor the melody so much in his life.

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With one last effort, the wounded warchanter charged the best with eagle wings, lion body and human torso, making a shout of WAAAAGH! cracked by his psychotic laughter.

He landed on its shoulder and the beast was quick to bite, tearing apart the sinewy muscle beneath the crushed cuirass and splattering around the tender entrails in a grean splurge. Grotsik's vision was foggy but the hearing wasn't.

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With an uncanny strenght, he clubbed the beast with his arm.

CRACK! CRACK! CRACK!

The arm broke but so did the creature's skull: with every smash pieces came out flying in all direction, cuting and lacerating the orruk, stabbing one of his eyes. But it did the job.

With a gargantuan crash, the beast fell, smashing into pulp Grostik's legs. He had nothing left from the belly-button downwards.

HE. HAD. WON.

Breathing heavily, blood supurating from his torn torso and gurgling through his laughing throat, Grostik close his eyes and basked in the feverish repercussion that hammered his eardrums.


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And then...



silence
   
 
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