Mostly pretty standard stuff.
Tweaks:
a. Give the Cmdr. a PENchip instead of the NSJ. The NSJ is a 12" bubble and you're in plenty of trouble if that needs to kick in. Switch his two GunDs for MarkerDs to match the purpose of the unit overall.
b. Dual flamers on a XV8 is a waste. Dual
FBs or PRs or
MPs are far more useful.
c. Majorly: I'd switch being a Hunter Cadre for a
CAD. This removes silly taxes like a
FA choice (GunDs

) and the 3rd unit of
FWs you don't want. Yeah, you lose the plus to
BS for some shooting, but you have loads of Marker Drones that will buff that anyhow. Those points can now be spent on XV8s with dual PRs; units that have far better punch than non-scoring GunDs and a 5 pack of
FWs. And with a
CAD, you still have a re-roll for Warlord trait on the far better table, Strategic Trait, and the
FWs gain ObSec.