It's written just fine. Don't be insulting.
OP, the list looks fun and relatively functional. I will agree that if you are worried about cheesing people off, a number can get quite salty when they see a Wraithknight. I think the suncannon/shield variant usually makes people less angry since it has no D, but you almost have to have the wraithknight if you want to take the list to tourneys.
Maybe do two separate lists - wraithknight for tourneys and another thing for casual. Hero's Path is supposed to be a good thing to use - Shadowseers are quite useful, the Solitaire can wreck face of you get him to the right place at the right time, and Death Jester... well, he could sit back near the Reapers or be a sacrificial unit for anyone who wants extra Soulbursting.
I have not run Yncarne yet, so no help there unfortunately.
Edit: ah spelling and autocorrect...