Forum adverts like this one are shown to any user who is not logged in. Join us by filling out a tiny 3 field form and you will get your own, free, dakka user account which gives a good range of benefits to you: No adverts like this in the forums anymore. Times and dates in your local timezone. Full tracking of what you have read so you can skip to your first unread post, easily see what has changed since you last logged in, and easily see what is new at a glance. Email notifications for threads you want to watch closely. Being a part of the oldest wargaming community on the net. If you are already a member then feel free to login now.

Helpful critique on this list I'm doing for a tourney at my local shop next week please. Cobbled it together, not sure what to do. Will be facing Mandrake/Lilith Lists, as well as Tau. Aware it is 2 points above he limit, but limit for the shop was 1005 pets for some reason.

Troops:

Tactical Squad 5 man

Flamer

Tactical Squad 5 man

Heavy Bolter

Tactical Squad 5 man

Heavy Bolter

HQ:

Librarian Base

Tech marine Base

Heavy support:

Devestator Squad

3 Plasma Cannon
1 Heavy Bolter

Land Raider

Dedicated Transport:

Razorback

Twin Lascannons

Thanks for reading! Also fielding as dark angels but pretty sure it doesn't make a difference in this list except for interromancy for the Libby.

How about swap the Techmarine with Sergeant Chronus and put on the Land Raider? He buff the Land Raider to BS 2+ until it is destroyed. He is also cheaper than Techmarine and can also repair one wound each turn. You may spend the points on additional combi weapon on the sergeants, or some storm bolters on the vehicles, or even a few addition marines models

You can get three razorbacks with twin lascannon each, for the same pts as a land raider. That gives you six lascannons instead of only four. You get 30 wounds instead of 16. You can transport 18 models instead of 10. You can swap twin lascannons for other choices, like a heavy12 twin ass cannon, saving some pts for other stuff. No need for a techmarine with four razorbacks. Exchange him for a captain to reroll any 1s you may roll when shooting the heavy12 twin ass cannon(s). Also use stormbolters on the razorbacks, they are very cheap (2 pts) and give you four shots at 12".
How about some company veterans with stormbolters and chainswords ? A unit of 5 models with stormbolter and chainsword will give you 20 shots within 12", and do 16 attacks in CC. If you use 3 units of 2 models each (+1 hq) you can get a vanguard detachment, +1 CP.

Oh damn forgot about that. Haha I'll post an updated list.


Automatically Appended Next Post:
Revised list:

Troops:

Tactical Squad 5 Man

Tactical Squad 5 Man
Flamer

Tactical Squad 5 Man
Heavy Bolter

Elites:

Company Veterans 2 Man
Storm Bolter

Company Veterans 2 Man
Storm Bolter

Company Veterans 2 Man
Storm Bolter

HQ:

Captain
Relic Blade, Stormbolter

Librarian

Techmarine

Dedicated Transport:

Razorback
Twin Heavy Bolter, Storm Bolter

Razorback
Twin Assault Cannon, Storm Bolter

Razorback
Twin Lascannons, Storm Bolter

Razorback
Twin Lascannons, Storm Bolter

I think this list is better, and it is better against infantry as well with the assault cannon and masses Bolter fire.


Automatically Appended Next Post:
Also I'm doing this with a WAAC mindset so please help create the most cheese list for 1000 points.