I can see roughly what you are going for. I took the liberty to draft a similar list for your consideration.
++ Battalion Detachment +5CP (Chaos - Chaos Space Marines) [44 PL, 8CP, 750pts] ++
+ No Force Org Slot +
Battle-forged CP [3CP]
Detachment CP [5CP]
Legion: World Eaters
+ HQ +
Dark Apostle [5 PL, 100pts]: 4. Hatred Incarnate, Mark of Khorne, Soultearer Portent, The Black Mace, Warlord, Wrathful Entreaty
Kharn the Betrayer [8 PL, 120pts]
+ Troops +
Khorne Berzerkers [9 PL, 170pts]
. Berzerker Champion: Chainaxe, Chainsword
. 9x Chainsword and Chainaxe: 9x Chainaxe
Khorne Berzerkers [5 PL, 80pts]
. Berzerker Champion: Boltgun, Chainsword
. 4x Chainsword and bolt pistol
Khorne Berzerkers [9 PL, 136pts]
. Berzerker Champion: Chainaxe, Chainsword
. 7x Chainsword and Chainaxe: 7x Chainaxe
+ Dedicated Transport +
Chaos Rhino [4 PL, 72pts]: Combi-bolter, Mark of Khorne
Chaos Rhino [4 PL, 72pts]: Combi-bolter, Mark of Khorne
++ Total: [44 PL, 8CP, 750pts] ++
As you can tell, i kept the apostle but switched his prayer. Soultearer will help wound stuff easier. Just drop it on the 10 man squad.
Added kharn cause he is a beast and is a threat.
Troops i decided to split into a 10 man squad to load up into a rhino and a 8 man squad to ride with kharn and the apostle. The last 5 man squad can hang back on objectives.
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