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2013/06/10 19:14:11
Subject: Orks Of America [Pic Heavy]
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Battleship Captain
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kestril wrote: cormadepanda wrote:
I would like you to point out my mistakes. I want readers to have an easy read. English/language is a major weak spot in my life.
Not so much anymore. You're definitely better, the trick is figuring out what points you want to get across before saying/writing anything.
But don't beat yourself up about. Your fluff is pretty well-written and engaging in some spots. English is hardly this massive hull breach in the battleship which is your life.
I feel like that metaphor failed. Point is: you're better than you think.
Hmm... battle ship, breaches.. needs more pants. Thanks for the compliments. Means quite a bit coming from your Major. Point taken, would like to read your Nano one of these days.
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2013/06/11 02:41:45
Subject: Orks Of America [Pic Heavy]
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Nasty Nob on a Boar
Inside of a CRASSUS ARMOURED ASSAULT TRANSPORT
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That's an impressive amount of green, how much do you think there is overall
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angel of ecstasy wrote:
You take a dump, you flip through the Dark Eldar codex, the concept art for Lelith Hesperax shows up and you pee on the floor.
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2013/06/11 15:08:04
Subject: Orks Of America [Pic Heavy]
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Battleship Captain
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My army is size around 4000pts most likely 4500, because i am not counting upgrades.
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2013/06/11 15:53:35
Subject: Orks Of America [Pic Heavy]
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Nasty Nob on a Boar
Inside of a CRASSUS ARMOURED ASSAULT TRANSPORT
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Wow. I have 2000 points of Deathwing so I think there's a slight difference in model count
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angel of ecstasy wrote:
You take a dump, you flip through the Dark Eldar codex, the concept art for Lelith Hesperax shows up and you pee on the floor.
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2013/06/11 15:55:20
Subject: Orks Of America [Pic Heavy]
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Battleship Captain
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TheAngrySquig wrote:Wow. I have 2000 points of Deathwing so I think there's a slight difference in model count
only a hundred or two. Nothing large.
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2013/06/11 15:57:21
Subject: Orks Of America [Pic Heavy]
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Nasty Nob on a Boar
Inside of a CRASSUS ARMOURED ASSAULT TRANSPORT
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37 orks in an army seems about right
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angel of ecstasy wrote:
You take a dump, you flip through the Dark Eldar codex, the concept art for Lelith Hesperax shows up and you pee on the floor.
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2013/06/14 04:12:32
Subject: Orks Of America [Pic Heavy]
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Stubborn Dark Angels Veteran Sergeant
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You got yourself a whole lot of grot firepower.
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2013/06/14 05:08:07
Subject: Orks Of America [Pic Heavy]
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Battleship Captain
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nice to see you again 40kFSU. Yeah, it is a whole bunch of dakka.
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