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Barpharanges







 thenoobbomb wrote:
MUST FINISH TO ANNOY BLOOD REAPER




You must copy and paste every post I have made and deliver money to my company for use of my name, and give praise to my glorious contributions to the codex.

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I didn't know you had a sense of humour!
Don't worry, you'll get a spot. I saved one specially for you.

This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2012/10/17 13:55:19


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Desperado Corp.

I want royalties. That's 100% of any profits made by the codex

Pretre: OOOOHHHHH snap. That's like driving away from hitting a pedestrian.
Pacific:First person to Photoshop a GW store into the streets of Kabul wins the thread.
Selym: "Be true to thyself, play Chaos" - Jesus, Daemon Prince of Cegorach.
H.B.M.C: You can't lobotomise someone twice. 
   
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If what you have told me is true about companies refusing to accept fan ideas (copyright, etc), I don't think this codex will make anything.

Currently attempting to put together a homebrew non-canon Space Marine chapter. If I can be bothered to getting around to painting the models and putting the things together of course... 
   
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Desperado Corp.

...
That was a joke Alie.

Pretre: OOOOHHHHH snap. That's like driving away from hitting a pedestrian.
Pacific:First person to Photoshop a GW store into the streets of Kabul wins the thread.
Selym: "Be true to thyself, play Chaos" - Jesus, Daemon Prince of Cegorach.
H.B.M.C: You can't lobotomise someone twice. 
   
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I know. I made a simple counter-statement.
Damn, I can alienate myself sometimes.

Currently attempting to put together a homebrew non-canon Space Marine chapter. If I can be bothered to getting around to painting the models and putting the things together of course... 
   
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Desperado Corp.

It didn't require one. regardless, I may or may not release my own interpretation of this.

Pretre: OOOOHHHHH snap. That's like driving away from hitting a pedestrian.
Pacific:First person to Photoshop a GW store into the streets of Kabul wins the thread.
Selym: "Be true to thyself, play Chaos" - Jesus, Daemon Prince of Cegorach.
H.B.M.C: You can't lobotomise someone twice. 
   
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Try them out for Fantasy, by all means. You could remove the psyker aspect completely in that case.

Currently attempting to put together a homebrew non-canon Space Marine chapter. If I can be bothered to getting around to painting the models and putting the things together of course... 
   
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Desperado Corp.

Never been a fan of fantasy.

Pretre: OOOOHHHHH snap. That's like driving away from hitting a pedestrian.
Pacific:First person to Photoshop a GW store into the streets of Kabul wins the thread.
Selym: "Be true to thyself, play Chaos" - Jesus, Daemon Prince of Cegorach.
H.B.M.C: You can't lobotomise someone twice. 
   
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Neither have I.

Currently attempting to put together a homebrew non-canon Space Marine chapter. If I can be bothered to getting around to painting the models and putting the things together of course... 
   
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Wight Lord with the Sword of Kings






North of your position

Fantasy is just as awsome.

   
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Wight Lord with the Sword of Kings






North of your position

I may turn it to fantasy when its done.

   
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Ancient Venerable Dreadnought





Thousand Sons Battleship wandering the galaxy...

Beastmen? Good...send in the Vampire Counts.

I should have left him there. He had served his purpose. He owed me nothing - yet he gave himself to me willingly. Why? I know not. He is nothing more than a pathetic human. An inferior race. A mon-keigh. But still I broke off my wings so that I might carry him easier. I took him from that place, into the snowstorm where our tracks will not be found. He is heavy. And he is dying. And he is slowing me down. But I will save him. Why? I know not. He is still warm. I can feel his blood ebbing across me. For every beat of his heart, another, slight spill of heat. The heat blows away on the winter wind. His blood is still warm. But fading. And I have spilled scarlet myself. The snow laps greedily at our footsteps and our lifeblood, covering them without a trace as we fade away.

'She sat on the corner, gulping the soup down, uncaring of the heat of it. They had grown more watery as of late she noted, but she wasn't about to beggar food from the Imperials or the "Bearers of the Word." Tau, despite their faults at least didn't have a kill policy for her race.' 
   
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I'm wondering whether I should also give my novel a mention as well...

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If its based on this race, I'm not sure I'll be able to handle it.

Beg for mercy, not that it will help you - Asdrubael Vect.  
   
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Barpharanges









A novel?

You haven't even got the race fully finished, yet your writing a novel? If it's based on the Lynx.....


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Already started it.
But that aside, any book can be good, as long as the writer wants it to be. How many books have you read that have invented entirely new societies, races or even worlds, but not bothered to question the origins? I have read many like this. So it still has potential. And I began writing it a long time before this.

What makes a book good is it's content. Especially how it flows, how it provokes emotion, and most certainly it's tale. You never know: my novel could be much better than what you first think...

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 Azariah Kyras wrote:
If its based on this race, I'm not sure I'll be able to handle it.

I've been writing since I was seven. So that's seven years on my clock.
But my only problem is:
I could never get past the first chapters. I don't know why, maybe I just left them and moved on.

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Barpharanges







 Mynameisalie wrote:
Already started it.
But that aside, any book can be good, as long as the writer wants it to be. How many books have you read that have invented entirely new societies, races or even worlds, but not bothered to question the origins? I have read many like this. So it still has potential. And I began writing it a long time before this.

What makes a book good is it's content. Especially how it flows, how it provokes emotion, and most certainly it's tale. You never know: my novel could be much better than what you first think...


The origin concept isn't good or even properly completed. It's going to collapse on itself until that is finished, books that have an entirely new race take years to be thought out and written. You haven't even got passed the first stage on the concept.

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You'll see...

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Writing it for a long time is good. Ralph Ellison took seven years to write Invisible Man, and while I didn't like it much, I can't deny it was good.

But he wasn't prepubescent when he started.


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It doesn't matter which age you start at, as long as you have experience.

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Barpharanges







 Mynameisalie wrote:
It doesn't matter which age you start at, as long as you have experience.


After experiencing the nature of your reaction to critisisim, you've proven you don't have that experience.

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Novels are different. You get the criticism after you write it.

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Ah I see. The Stephanie Meyer approach.

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Desperado Corp.

Alie: No.

Pretre: OOOOHHHHH snap. That's like driving away from hitting a pedestrian.
Pacific:First person to Photoshop a GW store into the streets of Kabul wins the thread.
Selym: "Be true to thyself, play Chaos" - Jesus, Daemon Prince of Cegorach.
H.B.M.C: You can't lobotomise someone twice. 
   
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I've already started it. Too late now.
But, I'll alter it as time goes on.

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 Azariah Kyras wrote:
Ah I see. The Stephanie Meyer approach.

Don't you ever compare me to her again.
EVER.

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Barpharanges







 Azariah Kyras wrote:
Ah I see. The Stephanie Meyer approach.


AKA the destined to be a poor story approach.

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Barpharanges







 Mynameisalie wrote:
 Azariah Kyras wrote:
Ah I see. The Stephanie Meyer approach.

Don't you ever compare me to her again.
EVER.


Your exactly like her.

In. Every. Way.

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