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This is more of a showcase of thinning materials than a guide on how to thin. You also contradict your 'golden rule' within 10 seconds of saying it.
As a guide it falls down on the "follow me to do this" factor. You mention pots being bad and why but then skip straight onto the thinning mediums. You don't mention the alternatives (placing the paint in the dropper or buying paints in droppers).
As a showcase it's all right but it doesn't mention whether or not it's for brushing or airbrushing. It ignores some of the other options (medium, varnish, acrylic thinner, alcohol [white spirits et al] etc.) but that can be forgiven due to the more interesting properties they have. What you do have you do list the pro's and con's with details on them (aka drawing attention to the 20:1 on flow aid) and you do leave it open for the viewer to decide, which is a good thing.
If going for future tutorials give a step by step with worked examples and don't give as many options out. Tutorials should be "here is my way of doing things, here's how to do it in lots of detail and this is the results".
If going for future showcases call it a showcase, list the pro's and cons with maybe some examples of the end results. Diversification of the products can be good but if you want to showcase thinners for brushing, limit it to only brushing thinners.
Hope this has helped.
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