These are great
HQ choices, but you need to make them different as per the 'leaders of the pack' rule. Throw a
WTT on one or give one a COTS.
Elites
Wolf Guard Pack
Meltabomb
4x Combi-melta
Power Fist
Drop Pod
looks good, 4x Combi-melta can kill most things with
AV, and can also be great for anti-
MC.
Troops
10x Grey Hunters
Powerfist
2x Flamer
Drop Pod
10x Grey Hunters
Powerfist
2x Flamer
Drop Pod
I would drop the
PF, as you don't get that many attacks with
GH. Other than that, good to go.
Heavy Support
5x Long Fangs
2x missile
2x Heavy Bolter
looks ok, I would personally take 4x
ML in a
TAC list, but if you're fighting eldar the
HB are good.
Fast Attack
3x Thunderwolf Cavalry
3x Storm Shields
You really don't need three
SS here, one is probably enough, and the points are better spent elsewhere. Upgrade the
LF ML to Lascannons or get some melta/plasma for the
GH.
Unless I've failed at math, that hits 1250 exactly.
My own concerns:
I've not used drop pods before, so I'm not really sure the best way to go about them. Should I throw the Long fangs in a pod instead and leave a Grey Hunter squad on the board? I think my big concern is about going second and getting the cavalry and whomever else obliterated before I have a chance to drop my pods.
I also haven't decided what to give my Rune Priests. One guy usually rocks Divination, and the other gets lightning and Jaws, but Jaws is useless against Eldar who laugh at initiative checks.
Questions/comments/improvements?
The general advice I give for
DP marines of any kind is to pick an area and drop everything you can on it, focusing the force on one point of the enemy line. Spread out, and you'll be divided and conquered, stay as a pack and you will succeed. You can afford to be agressive with the pods, as you will only mishap if you go off the board.
You should be able to deploy the
TWC out of
LOS if you have enough terrain, keeping them safe, and drop pods can also make good cover if used well.
For the
RP, I would say one with Divination, and the other should have Probably
LL and Storm caller, as the cover is useful against bladestorm weapons.
Hope that helps.