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-2000’s-The Ragon Empire is reborn by Emperor Illgoth, they conquer the following races, Milirians, Fevor, Liraz, and Drov.They slowly begin to expand westward.The Yukage unite the clans after 100 years of conflict, they begin to peacefully or forcefully take in races into the Shogunate, depending the clan ruling at the time.The Thresian empire makes first contact with the Ragon, they begin a trade agreement, and a non-aggression alliance.The Prophet of Jrova (God of Order) Pariah is born,and kills Illgoth, dying in the process,These marks him as the seventh prophet of Jrova.

2100’s-The Third Grand war happens, uniting the humans under one flag, they would gain FTL the same year, and go taking systems, mostly peacefully, as they meet no aliens, besides ancient ruins of what is suspected to be a site of a great war. The empire begins to settle down, when the Gaia civil war happens, between the Jer system, who want to be independent, and the Empire, after five years of conflict.

2200’s:The Humans make first contact with the Ragon, who begin to attack them, seeing the humans as a new race to enslave. The next seven years where a one sided war in favor of the Ragon, until they reach Gaia, in which the Empire has a trick up it’s sleeve, the Ydin class Dreadnought.Human-Ragon war ends in Human victory, all systems lost are recaptured by the Humans, with one being a planet for diplomacy, to keep the peace between the two races.Humans discover their psychic abilies, and a school founded by Daniel Bucklebee is made.The Order of the Merciful Hand is founded as a vigilante group.The Hardrock incident happens,in which the Ydin class dreadnought goes dark, and a ten man Search-and-Rescue team is sent, only three of them come back.Six months after the Hard rock incident, the Thresian declare war on the Humans over a Slag(What the galaxy uses for power) deposit in the Thee system, the war ends in Human victory

2300’s-The DMZ crisis happen, nearly causing a second Human-Ragon war, the Order of the Merciful hand take out a Hunk Cartel, who where dealing in slavery and arms trafficking. The rumored to be immortal assassin, Shadow, kills the Thersian Emperor, Kullus. The Mercenary groups, Blue Moon, Black Sun and Blood gulch take over the Ursian system, and after a six month war with the Empire of Gaia, Yste Shogunate ,The Thresian empire ,the mercenaries are defeated.

2400’s-The Rithian empire begins its conquest of many sectors and systems. They do not conflict with any of the other empire, and are made up of the Ko’ra. A subspecies of Humans. The Yste Shogunate and Ragon empire go to war. Ending in a stalemate. The Thresian Empire goes to war with the Empire of Gaia, ending in Human victory, do to using the new “Peaceful but fierce” Doctrine, which makes the military small during peacetime, but large and mighty during wartime, another reason is the Human Kalos-class titans. The Order of the Merciful hand wage war against the Jut cartel, it last for seven years, ending in Order victory. The Kriu campaign,later known as the first Chaos war, happens,when a Hrova Worshiper named Ferius raises a army of Hrova Cultist, Pirates and Renegades. The Ragon,and Humans form a coalition to end Ferius reign,. Expecting low casualties, the campaign nearly ends in disaster,as the Ragon and Human soldiers cannot get over their racial tensions,and both sides are still angry over the Human-Ragon war. The campaign ends in success with Ferius dead, and the cultist retreating back to their slums and crime-ridden part's of the cities.

2500-The Rithian Empire civil war begins, and end twelve years later, in the collapse of the Rithian empire. The Rithian Republic is founded, and begins efforts to take out the Imperial Remnant. The order of the Merciful hand loses twelve thousand men in a war with Black Moon criminal organization, nearly ending in disaster before the Order is forced to cut their loses, and make a truce with the Black moon. The Empire of Gaia and Rithian Republic make an alliance.

2600's-Power armor becomes more common place, both in military and commercial uses, the Yisuta replace the Mark-Eight power armor with the Mark Nine. The Great Plaque happens, beginning on the Rithian world of Crusant, and spreading all over the Rithian Republic, until they find a cure, ending the disaster, no one still knows what caused this, but it has been hinted to be of Divine origin. The Imperial Remnant, does not take advantage of this event, showing respect to their comrades, and thinking it would be cruel to attack an nation in time of crisis.

2700's-The Lucerians win their war of Independence against the Thresian empire, who respect the new nation.

2800's-A ragon named Jutou invents Psyguns, guns that fire rounds wrapped in Psychic energy, that can penetrate almost anything, The weapons soon become common place in the militarizes of the world.

2900's-The Chosen of Hrova, Cryus is born in the Tenten system, Hrova takes interest in him.Cryus begins to unite the Warbands of Hrova Worshipers. Cryus is a insane but brilliant man, who was born to a group of Hrova worshipers,Hrova is the god of chaos, who will do anything to expand his new domain

3000's-Cryus has unitied all the Warbands of Hrova Worshipers, he soons begins to attack the nations of the galaxy, and takes system after System in his surprise attack's, he is soon stalled, by a coalition of all Nations of the Galaxy,But not stopped, the war remains at a stalemate.

3052-Current year, the war continues,with the Cultist numbers seemingly infinite in number, and Cryus showing himself to be a Demon(Hora) Prince of Chaos, which wins him many battles.The Order of the Merciful hand Grand master, Tullus,begins to devise a plan to end the war.Which has cost billions of lives. A mysterious force, who call themselves, the Precursors, begin to help the Coalition forces in battle, and then disappearing.

Perhaps more explanation about everything (who is who, what is what, etc) would help.

I suggest making one thread about this, and just posting everything you create concerning the Gaiaverse in there.

 thenoobbomb wrote:
Perhaps more explanation about everything (who is who, what is what, etc) would help.

I suggest making one thread about this, and just posting everything you create concerning the Gaiaverse in there.

Seems fairly interesting Cpkeyes, however i totally agree with Noob's first point.

I also agree with his second point, a certain 'Inquisitor' and 'Sector' spring to my mind . (Not that your stuff is that bad).

Keep up with the original fiction buddy!

Hate to be "that guy", but this XKCD comic is pretty applicable to what you're writing...



~Tim?

Tim-Not sure what your saying, But thank you.

Also, I fixed some mistakes in the OP, at least ones I found.

Oh, I have to write about Pariah.

One of the characters in the current arc.

No Tiste Hora(Demon) is safe from Einshor's determination and will-Grand-Master Tullus on Einshor.

Name:Einshor.
Rank in the Order:Magistrate(Judge)
Age:30
Personality-Hates Tiste Hora with a burning passion, but his fond of studying them.He is seen as a rogue of sorts, going his own guy on most things, instead of the Codex venator daemoni. Socially awkward
Preferred equipment: Psypistol, the holy text, cross, and shields.
Psyker:Yes.
Powers:-By the Power of Jal, I summon thee-Summon dead allies,friends or enemies,and make them fight for you-Often used by Demon-Hunters.

Repent thy sin-Wipes all evil out of the evil-doers, only the most evil of people can resist this-Used by Demon-Hunters.

Blank-Cannot be sensed.By anyone, including Tiste Longa and Hora's

Holy Fire Manipulation.

Banish-All Demon-Hunters have this, the ability to banish a Demon back to the Rending.

Enhanced Swordsmenship.

Mind Control Resistance.

Visions-For some reason, Einshor was born with these visions, coming from what seems to be a divine origin.These allow him to see the future.
Bio: Einshor was born on the Order world of Eden, living a peaceful life, until Tiste Hora (Demons) attacked his world, The Hora killed most of his family, and burned his home city to the ground, and then left.Einshor grew a fiery hate of Demons in his heart, he grew up in his Grandmother and fathers home, and spent most of his time reading about the Demon hunts of the old world, isolating himself from social life. Einshor was recruited into the Ordo venator daemoni by a Magistrate who found his talents of tracking, during a hunt when Einshor was his servant. Einshor was put in the rigorous and brutal training of a Demon-Hunter,where many did not survive or pass,and succeeded. He was made into a Jurier September 12th 3024, when the Second Chaos war was still raging, and many Demon-Hunters where behind enemy lines, killing important Cultist leaders and Banishing the Tiste Hora that tried to come to the Mortal plane. Einshor saw many horrors, such as the Cultist human sacrifices, their willingness to be turned into monsters, and the insanity of most Cultist and Renegades.

Einshor showed himself to be a master Demon-Hunter, and was soon promoted to Magistrate, or Judge. Einshor, is known to be a rouge of sorts, and many times has been accused of being a Hrova worshiper, or being tainted by Hrova, but he has always shown himself to be a devoted worshiper of Jrova, and will do anything to keep the Galaxy safe from the forces of Chaos.For some reason,Einshor is always one to survive massacres that no man can normally survive .

Einshor is currently on the world of Triu IV, investigating a possible cultist attempt to bring a Hora-Prince to the mortal plain.

Events involved in-The Massacre of Kel-Lone Survivor, of the Demon-Hunter team sent to banish a Tiste Hora and kill or Repent a Cultist leader-3012

Banishment of the Hora Prince Melku-After hours of battle, and barely escaping with his life, Einshor and five other Demon-Hunters banished the Hora Prince Melku-3034

Assassination of Uranus-Einshor,with seven other Demon-hunters and a watcher, killed the Cultist leader Uranus before he could reach Demonhood-3024

Attempted Assassination of Cryus-The Lone survivor of the failed Assasination of Cryus, the Chosen of Hrova-3042

Battle of Uri-Killed the Cultist leader that was leading the attack-3043

The Justicar incident- One of the seven Demon-Hunters who found and destroyed a Hrova cult on the Order capital-3044

Battle of Triu IV-Currently investigating a possible Cultist attempt to bring a Hora Prince to the mortal plain-3045

Cpkeyes2 wrote:
Tim-Not sure what your saying, But thank you.

Also, I fixed some mistakes in the OP, at least ones I found.

Oh, I have to write about Pariah.

What I was trying to say is that making up words (like Ragon, Hrova, and Fevor) makes it harder for readers to get into what you're writing. To us, these words you make up are utterly meaningless. You know what the words mean, since you made 'em up, but we readers are left in the dark.

~Tim?

I'll try to write down what the words mean sometime, Through.

Ragon(Ra-gon) Men of war.

Hrova-Literally just means chaos.

Fevor-Demonspawn.