tommse wrote:But to be honest this is pretty close to those drop dead gorgeaus chicks on facebook complaining about how ugly they are...
I dunno about that... He didn't say that he couldn't paint. He said that his yellow isn't coming out how he wants it. Being blessed with good looks isn't really a learned 'skill' like painting either. Asking for feedback and advice is how people learn and advance. Just because he's already accomplished at painting, doesn't mean he should stop trying to improve. On the contrary, it is probably that attention to detail that made him good in the first place.
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OP:
I think the yellow is lacking vibrance. It's so muted that it is half way to being a sort of khaki sand colour. The sepia shadows aren't really helping with that, as they are also brown, and then white highlights also don't do anything to help. What is really missing here is yellow.
My recommendation would be to try and go over it lightly with a nice bold yellow glaze. That would help you get a bit more colour into the midtones and shadows, and you'd get some nice bright yellow highlights instead of just white (you could always add a bit of white back in after for the spectacular highlights). I really think that would help to tie the colours together a bit more.