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Welcome to the swarm! First thing, please remove the individual points costs from your list, it's against forum rules. Second I put your list through battlescribe to make it easier to understand. Your points are off as the codex has been updated a number of times, I'd recommend battlescribe for up to date point values.
++ Patrol Detachment -2CP (Tyranids) [47 PL, -2CP, 967pts] ++
+ Configuration +
Detachment Command Cost [-2CP]
+ HQ +
Old One Eye [11 PL, 220pts]
The Swarmlord [14 PL, 240pts]
+ Troops +
Hormagaunts [3 PL, 60pts]
. 10x Hormagaunt: 10x Scything Talons
Termagants [3 PL, 80pts]: Toxin Sacs
. 10x Termagant (Devourer): 10x Devourer
Tyranid Warriors [4 PL, 97pts]: Flesh Hooks, Toxin Sacs
. Tyranid Warrior: Deathspitter, Scything Talons
. Tyranid Warrior: Deathspitter, Scything Talons
. Tyranid Warrior (Bio-cannon): Barbed Strangler, Scything Talons
+ Heavy Support +
Carnifexes [12 PL, 270pts]
. Carnifex: Bio-plasma, Chitin Thorns, Heavy Venom Cannon, Monstrous Scything Talons, Spore Cysts, Thresher Scythe
. Carnifex: Bone Mace, Chitin Thorns, Monstrous Acid Maw, Monstrous Scything Talons, Spine Banks, Stranglethorn Cannon
++ Total: [47 PL, -2CP, 967pts] ++
What I'll say about your list is that even for a casual list you have a lot of redundant points and upgrades. First off drop the toxin sacs and flesh hooks off everything, same goes for the chitin thorns, acid maw and bio plasma from the carnifexes. Your falling into the trap a lot of people get caught into, putting too many eggs in the same basket. Also I'd choose either the swarmlord or old one eye at 1000 PTS, half your list is in two characters and (whilst cool) it is not good to do that. I'd drop old one eye myself, carnifexes get +1 to hit on the charge and you can't get better than +1 now so his aura is less needed.
If you make the changes I've suggested you'd have just over 300 points left to spend. I'd recommend some shooting,ba unit of hive guard or an exocrine would serve you well. You could also bulk up your warrior squad to 9 models and then take a prime as HQ to buff them up.
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