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Before I get into my story, I"m going to say this first: My story goes against nearly ALL 40k fluff becuz of what I'm going to write about. My story is about the two lost primarchs and their space marine legions going into the Star Wars galaxy and confronting the Galactic Empire.
Yeah, crazy I know. But I want to try it and see how it works out. Please comment/criticize, but please don't freak out at me.
Anyways, here is the introduction for my new story, Imperium vs. Empire
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It is the beginning of the 31st millennium. The Emperor of Mankind has just united the world known as Terra under his new Imperium of Man. Now looking out towards the stars, he is beginning what will be known as the Great Crusade.

Before the Emperor goes out to conquer the Milky Way, he created twenty generals for his vast armies. These generals, known as the Primarchs, would be a small manifestation of the Emperor himself to spread his mighty rule across all worlds.

Before the Primarchs were fully ready, the Dark Gods of Chaos had flung them out across the galaxy onto separate worlds. Now, the Emperor had his own personal mission: to find his twenty lost sons.

History states that the first Primarch to be discovered was the Emperor's favored son, Horus, the one who would nearly destroy the Imperium with his heresy. That is not what happened.

On the death world known as Jericho, Primarchs had appeared and conqered the world, creating an age of peace and prosperity. These two Primarchs, known as Raltar Enzanai and Ozai the Phoenix, were in a way, the most powerful Primarchs created. Raltar and Ozai had immense psychic powers that, when together, were one step below the Emperor's powers! This caused them to be the two perfect candidates for the Emperor's most sacred mission.

When the Emperor found his two lost sons, Raltar and Ozai had a vision of what was to come 10,000 years later. They saw the Imperium in its darkest age, the Emperor dead, the Space Marine Legions divided, and Chaos rising to power. This vision disturbed the Emperor greatly. For whenever the two Primarchs had a vision, it always came to pass, and the Emperor knew this.

So he charged Raltar and Ozai with a mission that appeared doomed to failure. He would give Raltar the Adeptus Astartes 2nd Legion and Ozai the 11th Legion, known as the Shadow Guard and the Legion of the Phoenix - along with multiple regiments of Imperial Army, Titan legions, mechanicum sects, and more - and leave the Milky Way galaxy! They would go to a new galaxy, create a new Imperium, and spread the light of the Emperor from there.

At first, Raltar and Ozai refused. But they knew that if they did not, the Imperium would die in the 41st millennium.

So a year before the Emperor discovered Horus, Raltar Enzanai and the Shadow Guard and Ozai the Phoenix and the Legion of the Phoenix left the Milky Way galaxy forever.

For twenty years, their massive fleet flew through the great void. After twenty years, they finally found a new galaxy that was suitable for their needs.

What the two leaders of the new Remnant of the Imperium did not know was that, in this new galaxy, events were unfolding. A war against separatists was coming to a close, something known as Order 66 was taking place, and a rebellion against this new galactic power was on the rise.

The Remnant of the Imperium was leaving one war, the Horus Heresy, for an entirely new war: the Galactic Civil War!

This is the story of the battle between Primarch..... and Sith Lord

Planet: Belkaden
Date: 5BBY
Time: 0645
Location: ExGal Station 4
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Belkaden. Home of the ExGal Station 4. Its mission: to search and study beyond the Galaxy.

For three years, Jason Kreel and his team of twelve others have sat in their small station that they call their home. Everyday, it was the same routine: check the monitors and sensors for anything that entered or exited the Galaxy, find nothing, then go to the rec room and hang out.

Today was going to be a little different.

Jason was sitting in the sensor room, monitoring one of the potential entryways into their galaxy, known as Vector 24. For three hours he sat there, half watching, half reading a good book. Just when he was about to give up and head to the rec room to be with the rest of his team, a sensor began emitting an alarm.

Jason nearly fell out of his chair in shock. The rest of the team came rushing into the sensor room, hearing the alarm. "Hey, Jason!" Kal'Ti'Ar, the only Zabrak on the base exclaimed. "What the heck is with the alarm?! Did we finally get something?!" Everybody else was asking the same question repeatedly.

"Shut up and get to your stations already!" Jason yelled. The ExGal team began rushing to their stations in excitement. Something was finally entering their galaxy! If only they knew...

"Set all sensors to Vector 24! Danni, get those probes out that way! Tiberus, prepare a message to ExGal HQ! Copy all data we have on this and send it to them! Marc, prepare the shuttle, just in case! We're gonna get every speck of data we can on this son of a gun!"

While the ExGal team preparing, the extragalactic object entered. And then another. And then another! It was an entire fleet of objects!

As Kal'Ti'Ar was controlling the main probes that were getting a visual feed, he nearly passed out in shock. Jason and Dr. Li, a Twilek doctor, came rushing to his aid. "Kal," Jason said. "What's wrong? What did you see?"

Kal'Ti'Ar recovered from his shock, barely, and whispered, "Sir.... it's a fleet. Of ships."

Jason was paralyzed in shock... and fear. Dr. Li touched him on the shoulder. "Sir? Your orders?"

Turning to Tiberus, Jason whispered, "Tiberus, forget the message to ExGal. Send a different one to the scientists at the Imperial Palace on Coruscant. Tell them.... tell them that a fleet has just entered the galaxy. Number of ships: hundreds, if not thousands. Threat level: potentially a serious danger to the Galactic Empire."

On ExGal Station 4, an orderly chaos ensued. Data was collected, probes launched, even a few communications sent to the fleet with no responses. Finally, the shuttle, containing Jason and five other ExGal scientists, was launched. Their destination: the Boran System, where this mysterious fleet was located.
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**More Later. Stay Tuned**

Interesting...*strokes chin*

(Might I point out that 20 years through the void is tiny. At least 100 years, mate.)

Other than that, well. I've always wanted that to happen.

(Though I was thinking more POST-Empire, but nevermind, that's just me.)

Nice...Me like...

I like it!
it's like my favorite dream (or nightmare depending on who i am) coming true!

but why are there people waiting for others to enter the galaxy?
seems kind of......... out of place.....
(maybe it's just me)

looks great so far you should just keep going

It has been long since you posted something new.

Good so far, one request... MORE DAKKA! You set up for a huge battle of starships and not nearley enough people write about these kinds of battles. But you're stopping just short of delivery! I want to read about a primarch B-slapping a Jedi

Cool i am subscribed.