I like the theme, I wasn't brave enough to try cammo for a blood axe horde, hats off to you sir. I also like the fact that your running 3 Boomgun looted's, I've never seen that before and I may try it. I think you should give your warboss cybork body, being an independent character he can be singled out in
CC and if any of those are power weapons then hes taking it in the face

. Also, keep in mind if he gets singled out and killed the boss pole is gone as well. I know you cant give one to snikky, just something to think about. Putting him in with snikky and his krew is a cool idea, but remember, the warboss does not get the infiltrate rule because the unit does not give it to him. He can however come on any table edge when outflanking thanks to snikky's special rule.
The two units of 5 Kommandos are not going to survive long in such low numbers, even with a boss pole they would get wiped. If you wanted to keep the kommandos I would probably combine the two to make a unit of 10. I would only take rokkits if you could take 3, with a
bs of 2 and needing 5 to hit only 1/3 are going to hit. All of your nobz should have
PK's, not only to deal with vehicles but to get through those high toughness low save units. With your boyz mobs I would consider dropping the bosspole's. As long as you have more then 10 in a unit then they are fearless so they have to eat through 10 before you have to start testing.
Hope this helps a bit bro.