Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated. I've gone back to the drawing board a bit and as such, here is my second attempt. Please let me know your opinions
245 - HQ
95 - Lord Commissar, power fist, camo cloak
90 -
CCS, Lascannon, regimental standard, vox
60 - Officer of the Fleet and Astropath
685 - Infantry
55 -
PCS 1, lascannon, vox
60 - Infantry 1A, flamer, vox
55 - Infantry 1B, flamer
(Lord Commissar attached to this 20 man unit)
55 -
PCS 2, lascannon, vox
60 - Infantry 2A, grenade launcher, vox
55 - Infantry 2B, grenade launcher
35 - Commissar
205 - Vet squad A, Harker, forward Sentries, 3 x plasma, vox
105 - Vet squad B, 3 x melta, vox
65 - Elite
65 - Marbo
100 - Fortifications
100 - Aegis Defence Line + Autocannon
(Lord Commissar controls Autocannon)
130 - Fast Attack
130 - Vendetta
(Vet squad B rides in Vendetta in reserve)
275 - Heavy Support
150 -
LRBT, flamer
125 - Basilisk
1500 - Total
Tactics
Static defence line army. Everything behind Aegis except Vendetta with Vet B (in reserve), Vet A (infiltrates) and Marbo (go Rambo, go).
Lord Commissar attaches to 20 man Infantry 1 unit to give them Camo Cloaks and also controls Autocannon from behind.
Vet A with Harker (plasmas) hunts down Terminators etc.
Vendetta with Vet B (meltas) goes after tanks etc.
How does that sound?
I've followed advice online (although a lot of it seems contradictory), but also selected units I like.
Thanks,
Pete