Looking better, but;
1) Drop all the vet sgt upgrades. Pretty much useless waste of points
IMO. You'd be better off using those points to give the sgt's Combi-weapons to match the squad they are with.
2) Put the
Dev squad's Plasma Cannon with one of the
Tac squads and the
tac squads
ML with the
devs .. make them more consistent (Las,
Plas,
ML in a single
Dev squad is looking to be a jack of all trades and certainly master of none).
3) Not big on Plasma Gun +
ML combo in the tacs. I'd prefer to see
PG/
PC and leave the
ML's for your
dev squad to use.
4) Assault squad's are sub-optimal. You could better use those points for something else. A Thunderfire Cannon perhaps
5) Your marines need transports! Rhinos would be a good addition (using the extra points from dropping the assault squad maybe).
6) Drop the storm bolter on the Chapter Master. If you want to give him something special and shooty, give him a combi instead.
Automatically Appended Next Post: Oh yeah, and if you're going for 1000 point games, you'll need to cut it to 1000.