You're massively overspending on the
CCS and giving them a dual role to boot - plasma or flamer, i'd not recommend both. Also for the points you'd be better dropping the plasma pistol altogether so you could take 4 plasma guns total, since they cost the *exact* same
Bolters on your Infantry platoon Sgts is also a bit questionable as you're paying for all of one more shot at
ap 5 with a
CC attack at AP2 and not getting the best out of your investment of 16/64 pts.
Combo of flamer/lascannon is a bit questionable too. If it is for a charging disincentive fair enough - are you using them as a combined squad?
Also, i'm not familiar with inquisition these days but unless you're taking unbound - don't you need a troops choice?
Finally, given the volume of shooting you have to hand i'd suggest you consider including Kurov's Aquila - effectively 10-15% improvement in everything
AM with preferred enemy makes a noticeable difference.
Emprah be with you!