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So it looks like you've got a few odd choices here.
First off, I assume you wanted the mask of secrets and not the laughing god's eye. Mask is the fearless and -2 leadership bubble from the shadowseer.
Your troupes are fine. I personally mix in a few embraces into mine for a bit of anti-horde with caresses, plus one dedicated caress unit. All of them have starweavers, which I prefer for mobility and protection.
Prismatic cannon is hit or miss. I'd drop it for now and play with points. If you really have 5 extra points, go for it. Void weavers are honestly terrible and I wish we didn't have to take them.
Dark Artisan. Talos wants ichor injector instead of chainflails. Fleshbane with instant death is too good to pass up on. You can threaten GMCs in a pinch. This haemy wants nightmare doll instead of syndriqs, since you already have poisoned. Fleet is irrelevant, only rampage might be useful, but it's better served on the grotesquerie haemy.
Likewise, the dark artisan wants a webway. No reason to ever leave it off. Gets around the mobility issue they have from the get go.
Grotesqueire is good. You can afford to drop the aethersails and portal if you wanted. I tend to deepstrike both units, but starting on board is viable as well. If you can find the points, an aberration with scissorhands is a nice addition to each unit.
With that in mind, you've got a strong, close combat core. However, you are not allowed to start battle brothers in transports. Unless you are moving your seers into raiders turn 1, there is no way to deepstrike in the raider with the shadowseers, thanks to the GW FAQ.
I also worry you are low on psychic dice. 6 + d6 doesn't cut it for all the powers you are really wanting. If you got the two seers into the haemonculus' grot squad, only one could cast shriek. You'll want to fish for mirror of the minds and laugh of sorrows as well, what with all the debuffs you have going on, both of which are costly to reliably cast.
If anything, ditching the dark artisan for some farseers could be viable, but it's a rework of the whole list at that point.
Other than that, good luck!
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