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  List (1848):
HQ
   150pts - Librarian (Epistolary)
Elites
   65pts - Techmarine (Power Axe)
Fast Attack
   240pts - Assault Squad - 10 Marines (T-Hammer / 2x Flamer) Rhino
   150pts - Attack Bike Squad 1 - 3 Attack Bikes (Multi-Melta x3)
   150pts - Attack Bike Squad 2 - 3 Attack Bikes (Multi-Melta x3)
Heavy Support
   233pts - Devastator Squad - 8x Marines (4x Multi-Meltas) Drop Pod
   90pts - Predator Tank (Autocannon / Heavy Bolters)
Troops
   270pts - Tactical Squad 1 - 10 Marines (Fist / Flamer / Missile) Razorback (T-Link Assault)
   270pts - Tactical Squad 2 - 10 Marines (Fist / Flamer / Missile) Razorback (T-Link Assault)
   230pts - Tactical Squad 3 - 10 Marines (Fist / Flamer / Multi-Melta) Rhino
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  Elements:
Forward Element 01:
   Tac01: 5x Marines (Fist / Flamer) + Librarian || Razorback
   A-Bike01
Forward Element 02:
   Tac02: 5x Marines (Fist / Flamer) + Techmarine || Razorback
   A-Bike02
Forward Element 03:
   Tac03 (full) || Rhino
   Assault (full) || Rhino
   Predator
Rear Element:
   Tac01: 5x Marines (Missile)
   Tac02: 5x Marines (Missile)
Drop Element:
   Devastators || Drop Pod
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  Counts:
50 Marines / 5 Tanks / 6 Bikes / 1 Drop Pod
5 Scoring Units / 15 independent targets
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Please give criticism. I'm going for bland but functional.
I'm a bit on the fence about the assault cannons on the razorbacks, as they seem a bit points-intensive.

You can't mount 10 Marines in a Razorback, hence no special weapons for a Razorback mounted squad. (Unless that's changed? I just re-read the entry and it has no explicit requirement that the squad number 6 models vice 10... combat squads, perhaps? Was under the impression you could only take a dedicated transport option that would the squad who purchased it can fit in...)

You can take a Razorback with a 10-man Tac Squad but you'll need to Combat Squad in order to use it.

Yep. Need to split them. That's why I have the points list and the element list.

Devastators with multimeltas in a Drop Pod is a bit strange since they cannot shoot after arrival, unless you want to keep the Devs out of Pod and let the Pod arrive empty.
I'd replace them with a Sternguard unit carrying combi-meltas.