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HQ: Chaos Lord " H'Tuer" 90pts Models Count
-Mark Of Slaanesh 5 pts
-Wings 20 pts
-Deamon Weapon(Blissgiver) 40pts =155pts 1
Elites: Terminator Squad "V'dalas" 150pts
-3 sets lightnig claws =30 5
-Asp Champ 10 pts =190
Troops: CSM Squad " Twi'lek" 150pts 10
-Asp Champ 15pts 1 tank
-Power Fist 25pts
-Melta Gun 25pts
-Rhino 35 pts =250pts
CSM Squad " L'rent" 150pts 10
-Asp Champ 15pts 1 tank
-Power Fist 25pts
-Melta Gun 25pts
-Rhino 35 pts =250pts
CSM Squad " V'let" 150pts 10
-Asp Champ 15pts 1 tank
-Power Fist 25pts
-Melta Gun 25pts
-Rhino 35 pts =250pts
CSM Squad P'Agorn" 150pts 10
-Asp Champ 15pts 1 tank
-Power Fist 25pts
-Melta Gun 25pts
-Rhino 35 pts =250pts
Heavy: Land Raider =220pts 1 Tank
Fast Attack:Raptor Squad"Schnell leicht"=160pts 8
-Asp Champ =15pts
-powerfist =25pts =200
Total Pts= 1765
Total Models= 54 models +5 tanks
HQ pts/% =155/ 8.3%
elites pts/%=190/ 10.2%
troops pts/%=1000/ 54%

Consider I will put in marks of Slaanesh with all the squads to fill out the 100 remaining points. Now for the fluff I would say.

++++++++++++++++++++++Commique to Inquisitor Lord of Segmentum Obsurace by Inquisitor Lord Segmentum Sebatious+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
To the most exhaleted of lords of the Ordo’s Malleus, I write to you of an appraoching threat in hopes of seeking add in my sector against those who would forsake the Golden throne. In recent years I have seen an influx of traitor activity by a group that is known to worship the dark prince of the Ruininous Powers. This pleasure chapter has come to be known as the “Flawless Sons” and with much blood I have been able to assertain information on there history, and what they currently have in their possestion.
During the time of the Great Crusade a young line Captain of the Emporers Childrens Legion by the name of Jeaseron Krek started to make his way up the ranks. Jeaseron was a captain who came from the ++++++++++++++++Section Removed by order of the Inquisition +++++++++++++++++++++ which I feel this aspect is of great importance as for his part in the Great Heresy. When the legion fractured after their failure at Terra Jeaseron stayed with his most beloved Primarch the now Demon Prince Fulgrim. As such Fulgrim saw the great talent in this young captain and promoted him in turn to Lord Commander over 10 companies. This put Jeaseron in control of close to 3000 Traitor Space Marines and 54 separate battle cruisers. This dangerous force was given free rain to do as it pleased and in response Jeaseron went upon a killing spree that would rival even the Scurge.
While fighting on a demon world n M33 Jeaseron came across a weapon that was said to have powers that would increase the stregnth of any who possess it. We now know that this weapon was a demon weapon who bore one of the dark princess greater deamons inside it. The sword was only known as Blissfull Peace. Jeaseron took the sword from the dead body of a rival he was fighting. It is said that the weapon called to him and thus he was so attracted by it. Slowly the deamon within began to corrupt his mind and warp it to believe that he needed to seize power for himself and break away from Fulgrim.
With almost 2700 of his men and another 1600 from other Slaanesh warhost, along with 23 frigates, and battle cruisers Jeaseron Krek broke away in one bloody night from the Emporers Children Legion and formed the Flawless Host. Believing themselves to be the true embodiement of the Dark Prince Slaanesh the host celebrated with 666 days of blood lusting, and orgies to rival that of the great pleasure world of Peruna 9. Jeaseron had a strong taste for blood and it is said that he enjoyed taking as many female captives as possible and slowly drained them to death. Listening to their every scream in utter exctasy. After eating his victims depending on how well they tasted or lasted for his ammusment he would saw off their body parts with a only rusty knife and attach them to his armor.
All this bloodletting and killing would be enough to satisfy even the brass throne but it was not for the lord of skulls I speak but of the prince of pleasure. Slaanesh took notice of Jeaserons actions and slowly began to elevate him to what would hopefully for him be the level of deamon prince. It was during this time the captain H’thuer the Usurper as he would come to be know would rise through the ranks.
What information we have on H’thuer the Usurper starts with his birth on the planet of ++++++++++++++++Section Removed by order of the Inquisition +++++++++++++++++++++ . H’thuer at this point was granted the title of Aspiring Host (which is of the eqivuelent to captain in other chapters) in the year of M35-645-09. This would put him in charge of 134 Traitor Marines there abouts. H’thuer would soon start using his position to seize more control over the Flawless Host. Time and time again he would challenge ofther “Hosts” leaders within the chapter to single combat. Each participant as we are told was only allowed one lash to use as a weapon. By the year of M36-798-04 H’thuer had control over almost 700 of the chapters traitor marines. He would use this time to make his move for control.
++++++++++++++++Section Removed by order of the Inquisition +++++++++++++++++++++ thus H’thuer would emerge the victor over Jeaseron. Little more is known as to what happened to Jeaseron krek but it is believed that the dark prince elevated him to the level of Deamon Prince. In the future we should watch the fronts very carefully for any semblance of Jeaseron Krek for I fear the galaxy has not seen the last of him.
H’thuer Now had control of the Host and moved quickly to remove any opposition from his ranks. Those that did not flee immediately or defied his leadership were brutally butchered and made as examples to the otehrs. H’thuer used this time to unvail the deamon weapon of Blissfull Peace long thought to have vanished with its former master Jeaseron Krek. H’thuer now had under his control 1300 Traitor marines and 14 ships of the fleet. He made alliances with other Warhosts that followt he dark prince and even forged a truce withthose who still went by the name of “The Flawless Host”.
Tacticts of the Sons:
I feel after encounter these forces in battle on serveral occasions that I have a solid understanding of how they operate. Often believing that the fight should be taken to the enemy instead of the other way around H’thuer believes highly in mobile warfare. Their Warhosts makes heavy use of rhinos, as well as bikes. They are know to only be in possestion of 3 landraiders but it is unsure if they have aquired more. Thus these monstrous creatures are seldom ever seen in battle, but it is known that one is always present.
H’thuer has made countless packs with the Cult of speed or raptors, and has even been said to have stolen from The Despoiler himself a dozen sets of tactical drednaught armour. This has put him as a marked man amoungst the black legion and its allies.
We do know for certain that the legion does not hold in it’s possesion any drednaughts, or hold any pacts with the Oblitorator cult as these go against his belief of close combat fighting.
I will continue to send you updates my Lord on this threat as best I can, but head my warning very seriously that H’thuer must be stopped.++++++++++++++++Last transmission from the Segmentum Sebatious before it fell that year to Traitor Marines. Envoy should be sent to scout out the sector and determine if redemable or not. Recommend requesting help from Adeptus Astartes++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Maybe take off the individual points costs...
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Lord, MoS, Wings, DW.
5 Terminators, 3 Pairs of LC, Champ.
10 CSM, Fist, Meltagun, Rhino.
10 CSM, Fist, Meltagun, Rhino.
10 CSM, Fist, Meltagun, Rhino.
10 CSM, Fist, Meltagun, Rhino.
Land Raider
8 Raptors, fist.

Was that so hard?

Lord: meh.
Terminators: they seem like they will be in the LR: I suggest a chain fist and drop the champ upgrade.
Troops look ok, but you priced the melta gun wrong. A pair of special weapons is good, meltas/flamers offensive, while plasma for defensive.
LR: where's Daemonic Possession or EA?
Raptors: Icon and special weapons and more bodies are suggested.

Where are the icons of slaanesh on the termies, CSM, and raptors?

Sanctjud wrote:Maybe take off the individual points costs...
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Lord, MoS, Wings, DW.
5 Terminators, 3 Pairs of LC, Champ.
10 CSM, Fist, Meltagun, Rhino.
10 CSM, Fist, Meltagun, Rhino.
10 CSM, Fist, Meltagun, Rhino.
10 CSM, Fist, Meltagun, Rhino.
Land Raider
8 Raptors, fist.

Was that so hard?

Lord: meh.
Terminators: they seem like they will be in the LR: I suggest a chain fist and drop the champ upgrade.
Troops look ok, but you priced the melta gun wrong. A pair of special weapons is good, meltas/flamers offensive, while plasma for defensive.
LR: where's Daemonic Possession or EA?
Raptors: Icon and special weapons and more bodies are suggested.

Where are the icons of slaanesh on the termies, CSM, and raptors?

havent put the icons in yet.. im at work and had this as a file I had sent to myself so was not able to look them up. I can see why you say pull the asp. champ on the termies AT the time Imade this list for 2k and had to drop stuff like EA on the LR so as to insure I fit a bike squad in. The raptors are more of a bounding overwatch unit set to saok up shots until my 40+ CCW CSM arrive. Since chaos une bolter till they get in close this makes rhino rush very effective for them.