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Can use give me some advice for this figure please??

Well, the cloak is great, so no need to change it. From the photo however, the blue seems to be quite rushed, at least in comparison to the obvious effort put into the cloak.

I would tone down the gold a tad bit with dry brushing or more washing. And possible add some weathering effects to the model, great piece though

The cloak looks great, and the rest seems definitly OK. There are a matter of details though. The purity shields on the inside of the cloak could look much better if you picked them out in there own color+paper. Drilling the gunbarrel is also a good way of detailing. As stated above the gold seems a little heavy, maybe drybrushing it with some lighter variant of gold?

i would suggest rotating pics to be upright before posting them to dakka. you can do it free in almost any program where you open pics to edit them (also in windows, right click, preview, then the circular arrow button until upright, then save). the mods can't do it once its posted.

I would try filling in some of the details with a color you havent used; eg. the designs on the bolter. From the picture it looks like you have only used 5-6 colors to paint the model.

Maybe lightening up the skin tone on the face?

Maybe?

Really - it is very nicely done!

Thanx for the info and its not actually done, I've got allot more work to do on the gun and the banner and the face.
Can anyone give me some ideas on how to make the banner and the front better????

I don't like the blue hair, but that's just me. All colours but brown or black or blonde for hair is silly.

Well I haven't done the hair yet, I'll do that soon though!