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Regular Dakkanaut




North Carolina









I guess I'm making this thread because it seems to be the thing to do when you finish a model...

And honestly, I wouldn't mind some constructive criticism. I think it looks decent, but it's missing something, (perhaps quite a bit of something) and I don't really know what that is. So, feel free to point out what I can do to make it better.

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Speedy Swiftclaw Biker





Nashville TN

It may be that the head is not set for the angle of the gun but you did a good job of dealing with that with the eyes. Looks good though. I'm not seeing what is missing.

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Sure Space Wolves Land Raider Pilot






Missing more pics from different angles. This looks good though.

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Regular Dakkanaut




North Carolina

rokitchikin wrote:Missing more pics from different angles. This looks good though.


Done.
   
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Storm Trooper with Maglight





Wisconsin

I think the fur looks fantastic. You may want to highlight with a tad lighter color on just the very edges of the armor. Thats about all the criticism I have on this one.

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Axis & Allies Player




netherlands

Some directional lighting would really make the eyes glow.
   
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Chaplain with Hate to Spare






Beezley, good to see some more stellar work dude! nice stuff, maybe lighten off the edges of the wolf pelt so it looks a bit more natural? as far as criticism goes that's all I got! it's neat, colours are good and I love the baroque feel of the brassy gold, come on get painting, now we need more!

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