Wow, you waited a full sixteen and a half hours to bump your own list.

While everyone enjoys a healthy dose of storyline with their toy soldiers (I know I do!), it's much easier to read your list if you don't have things like added names and bits of story and if you line things up horizontally.
Lord - Royal Peg, Grail Vow, Armor of Agiluf, Sword of the Lady's Champion, Lance -
259
Prophetess - Lv.4, Royal Peg, Dispel Scroll - 300
Paladin -
BSB, Wailing Banner - 124
50x Man-at-Arms - Full Command - 277
50x Man-at-Arms - Full Command - 277
15x Knights of the Realm - Full Command, Banner of Chalons -
394
15x Knights of the Realm - Full Command, Banner of Swiftness -
399
20x Bowmen - Skirmishers, Light Armor, Musician, Champion - 170
16x Bowmen - Light Armor, Musician, Champion - 122
10x Bowmen - Champion, Musician -
80
Field Trebuchet - Craftsman - 100
Total:
2502
Now that it's a little easier to read... I've italicized parts of your list where you had incorrect point totals. Looks like you were off on certain things like Banner of Swiftness being 15pts, your Lord being a little cheaper, and you can't take 8x Bowmen since they're a minimum of 10.
I would change around your infantry a bit. I don't think you really need 5 ranks of Horded MaA. If it's something that actually has more than four ranks and you just want to pin it down, quick reform to 5x8 and you won't be going anywhere. Ranked archers are better in packs of 20 and I wouldn't bring any more than 10 Skirmishing ones (if any at all). I'd also pick up Braziers for each of them. It's a total of 15 points to give three units of Archers flaming arrows, totally worth it. What isn't worth it are the Archer Champs. Extra points for a single BS4 shot out of your volley? Same with Light Armor upgrades. A pure 6+ armor save doesn't exist against most things and barely exists even when it's there. Just these changes to your list opens up quite a few points.
If it were my list, and using these units only, I'd probably play around a bit. Since the Lord's Sword seems pretty important to your storyline I kept it in there too.
Phrophetess - Dispel Scroll, Pegasus - 300
Lord - Sword of the Lady's Champion, Dragon's Claw, Virtue of the Ideal, Grail Vow, Pegasus - 259
Paladin - Wyrmlance, Obsidian Amulet,
BSB - 124
15x Knights - Full Command, Banner of Chalons - 394
14x Knights - Full Command, Banner of Swiftness - 399
40x Man-at-Arm - Full Command - 227
40x Man-at-Arm - Full Command - 227
20x Archers - Braziers, Musician - 130
20x Archers - Braziers, Musician - 130
10x Archers - Skirmishers, Braziers, Musician - 75
Trebuchet - Craftsman - 100
Trebuchet - Craftsman - 100
Total: 2497
I swapped up your Lord a little bit. He's no longer the general, but he's a better combat character with Virtue of the Ideal and the Dragon's Claw helps a great deal against Lore of Metal and makes his Blessing a permanent 5+. I gave the Paladin the Wyrmlance so he could still be S6 on the charge, except now it's a Flaming Lance and you get a neat breath weapon! With this Lance you can slam into anything relying on Regen and remove it's Regen before the rest of your Lance Formation hits. With the Obsidian Amulet that unit has MR2 so has a decent 4+ ward save against Lore of Metal and a 3+ against S5 or better magics.
Edit: Left the Pegasus out of the Lord's item list.