Author |
Message |
 |
|
 |
Advert
|
Forum adverts like this one are shown to any user who is not logged in. Join us by filling out a tiny 3 field form and you will get your own, free, dakka user account which gives a good range of benefits to you:
- No adverts like this in the forums anymore.
- Times and dates in your local timezone.
- Full tracking of what you have read so you can skip to your first unread post, easily see what has changed since you last logged in, and easily see what is new at a glance.
- Email notifications for threads you want to watch closely.
- Being a part of the oldest wargaming community on the net.
If you are already a member then feel free to login now. |
|
 |
![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/03/12 08:37:19
Subject: Wraith guard c&c wanted
|
 |
Sneaky Striking Scorpion
|
Here he is.
|
3,500pts 4,000pts 150pts lol
|
|
 |
 |
![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/03/12 09:04:53
Subject: Wraith guard c&c wanted
|
 |
Longtime Dakkanaut
|
Are we commenting on the work of a beginner, long-time painter, etc?
The basics are all excellent - paint not too thick, good control of where the colour has gone etc...
It looks like there are one ot two places where a little more prep work may have helped, but overall, there are no obvious flash lines or anything.
Personally, I think I'd like to see at least one more final highlight on the purple and blue, as it looks just a tiny bit flat at the moment. Not bad, don't get me wrong, just a short step away from finished.
The main thing I'd like to see is slightly better photography so we can see the details more clearly. Setting up some white sheets of paper under and behind the model, with natural light shining in through the window would give a much better image.
|
|
|
 |
 |
![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/03/12 09:30:11
Subject: Wraith guard c&c wanted
|
 |
Sneaky Striking Scorpion
|
Well ive painted 2g pts of nids and 1500pts of tau before this if thats anything to go by lol, im guessing you mean extreme highlighs yea? Im not a huge fan of the little near on white highlights, but thats just me, cheers
Oh yea its 8pm here so all I had was a fluro to light it.
|
This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2011/03/12 09:31:36
3,500pts 4,000pts 150pts lol
|
|
 |
 |
![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/03/12 10:15:33
Subject: Wraith guard c&c wanted
|
 |
Long-Range Black Templar Land Speeder Pilot
|
Well done man looks good, as one of the other guys said you might want to highlight some stuff on his head it would look even better!
|
Templars 1800pts Guard 3600 pts Ba 3400. Grey Knights 3600 pts |
|
 |
 |
![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/03/12 11:58:59
Subject: Wraith guard c&c wanted
|
 |
Sneaky Striking Scorpion
|
I washed the head with grephonne then highlighted with bone, the liight washed it out abit though
|
3,500pts 4,000pts 150pts lol
|
|
 |
 |
![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/03/12 15:17:42
Subject: Wraith guard c&c wanted
|
 |
Jovial Plaguebearer of Nurgle
|
It may be just the photo but I'd have a starker hard edge highlight for the purple. Mix in some Bleached Bone or Dheneb Stone and do the very edges.
Other than that it looks good, purple isn't easy to get right.
|
|
 |
 |
![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/03/13 00:34:13
Subject: Wraith guard c&c wanted
|
 |
Sneaky Striking Scorpion
|
Your telling me lol. The highlights are a bit understated but they look better in real life.
|
3,500pts 4,000pts 150pts lol
|
|
 |
 |
![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/03/13 08:10:25
Subject: Wraith guard c&c wanted
|
 |
Discriminating Deathmark Assassin
|
I'd use some kind of color on the spirit-stone-ish bumps on his shoulder vane. And I feel like the purple is too flat, but it may just be the picture.
And maybe some kind of pattern on his 'face'.
Looks great aside from those picky bits, though.
|
|
 |
 |
|