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Made in ca
Storm Trooper with Maglight





Vancouver

... the fall of the Persecutors Sanguine, a shining becon amoungst other BA succsessors, is a story of tragady and sorrow.

The begining of the end

It all started in 849.M41, when task force Omega Jugdement was dispatched to combat a growing chaos cult in the DELLETED BY ORDER OF THE ORDO HERETICUS.
The task force included elements of the 3rd and 10th Companies, and for the most part was sucesfull in the cleansing. But there was a single young neophyte, left behind as the task force left, looking to the voices in his head that would transform him into the chapters worst nightmare.

The Growing threat

Ten years later in 859. M41 Chapter Astropaths detect high Bursts of warp activity aproching the chapter home world of Adrostia.
The chapter master, High Judgementor Valuquez, called back all main fleet detachments to deffend the coming storm. Yet nothing in his Holy Emporers divine grace, could prepare any one for the coming storm, or the pain that awaited them in the coming days.

The Storms Comming

Just as the bulk of the chapter fleet was on arival, the beast, the monster came, it came with furry. it was The former neophyte, transformed into a Dark lord of chaosknown as 'the Assendant', was furious at his former brothers for abondoning him. His ships assulted the chapters fleet like wolfs to a flock lambs. Deamons, Heritics, and renaged marines now polluted the planets surface drowning all who fought in the chaos that swept the land.

The Fall of Greats

For High Judgementor Valuquez, the battle was lost, it was six standard months since the siege began. His home, all he ever cared for, was in ruin. Not being able to bear with the fact he might lose it all to Chaos, Valuquez orderd the enmass planetary bombardment of the chapter stronghold, thus detonating the the masivly powerfulll reactors. The order was swift and brought a end to the invasion, having rather seen his world die, Valuquez order the fleet to dispers and repaint thier colours black and white following the mytar of thier home wolrd.

The Acsession of The Lord of A Thousand Tears

What of the Assendant? Well there a rumours he died that day, others he was murdered by his crew. But the truth is though he has risen to the throne of Deamonhood, and he has been givin a name The Lord Of a Thousand Tears, for not one of the Persecutors Sanguine numbe did not weep at the loss of thier home.


~So yea hope this explaines things, for my chapter a bit, C&C welome~

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Made in ca
Storm Trooper with Maglight





Vancouver

C&C

Link to my Gaurd blog, PLease Coment!: http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/497565.page#0  
   
Made in gb
Bounding Assault Marine





Somewhere, doing somthing, of very little intrest for others!

Very good. Nice story!

   
Made in ca
Storm Trooper with Maglight





Vancouver

thanks man!

Link to my Gaurd blog, PLease Coment!: http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/497565.page#0  
   
 
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