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2011/06/06 09:14:08
Subject: Necron Lord Awakening RE-BOOT
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Irked Necron Immortal
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Ok so this my first attempt to write something from a necron perspective. i wanted to convey the the individualness of a lord compared to his other necrons and his connectivity to them, please read it and comment as you like. i am by no means a proffesional nor do i want to be. i just like good stories. so here goes:
OK SO I HAD TO TWEEK A BIT OF THE STORY TO GO ALONG WITH THE NEW CODEX.
GO TO PAGE 2 TO SEE THE RE-BOOT
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This message was edited 2 times. Last update was at 2011/12/29 21:09:50
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2011/06/06 12:08:35
Subject: Necron Lord Awakening
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Renegade Inquisitor de Marche
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Interesting...
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Dakka Bingo! By Ouze
"You are the best at flying things"-Kanluwen
"Further proof that Purple is a fething brilliant super villain  " -KingCracker
"Purp.. Im pretty sure I have a gun than can reach you...."-Nicorex
"That's not really an apocalypse. That's just Europe."-Grakmar
"almost as good as winning free cake at the tea drinking contest for an Englishman." -Reds8n
Seal up your lips and give no words but mum.
Equip, Reload. Do violence.
Watch for Gerry. |
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2011/06/08 08:24:11
Subject: Re:Necron Lord Awakening
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Irked Necron Immortal
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OK SO I HAD TO TWEEK A BIT OF THE STORY TO GO ALONG WITH THE NEW CODEX.
GO TO PAGE 2 TO SEE THE RE-BOOT
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This message was edited 3 times. Last update was at 2011/12/29 21:04:20
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2011/06/08 14:40:15
Subject: Necron Lord Awakening
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Blood-Raging Khorne Berserker
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love the fluff truly love it! once again necrons have given me something nice to read
I hope more is underway 
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2011/06/09 00:27:20
Subject: Re:Necron Lord Awakening
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Irked Necron Immortal
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OK SO I HAD TO TWEEK A BIT OF THE STORY TO GO ALONG WITH THE NEW CODEX.
GO TO PAGE 2 TO SEE THE RE-BOOT
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This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2011/12/29 21:04:43
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2011/06/10 12:41:49
Subject: Necron Lord Awakening
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That was awesome. This was better than most of the fluff in the codexes (codii ?)
Please do continue the exploits of Planet Lord487.0
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PS. As can be seen from my join date and post count, I'm a lurker, I only post if I feel it will be constructive and it's necessary. Your brilliant fiction forced my hand... so to speak, and I just had to say job well done.
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This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2011/06/10 12:48:53
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2011/06/10 14:52:34
Subject: Necron Lord Awakening
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Irked Necron Immortal
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thanks, more to come soon!
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2011/06/10 22:26:53
Subject: Necron Lord Awakening
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Utilizing Careful Highlighting
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Some of the only necron fluff i have seen, and you really capture the essence of the necrons!
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2016/11/20 08:17:37
Subject: Re:Necron Lord Awakening
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Irked Necron Immortal
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OK SO I HAD TO TWEEK A BIT OF THE STORY TO GO ALONG WITH THE NEW CODEX.
GO TO PAGE 2 TO SEE THE RE-BOOT
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This message was edited 3 times. Last update was at 2011/12/29 21:05:09
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2011/06/12 12:32:56
Subject: Necron Lord Awakening
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Utilizing Careful Highlighting
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ohh, very nice, im am loving it, and really like how you are progressing th encrons lords personality. 
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2011/06/12 20:45:16
Subject: Necron Lord Awakening
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Bane Thrall
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MAKE. MORE. PLEASE.
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They stare into your soul.
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2011/06/12 22:17:49
Subject: Necron Lord Awakening
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Irked Necron Immortal
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Thank you every one for your support. I enjoy writing this but for me it is extremely time consuming for I am a very slow writer/typer. I promise more to come as soon as I can and thanks again.
P.S. tell all of your friends, the more comments, the more I am motivated to spin this tale!
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This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2011/06/12 22:18:19
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2011/06/13 11:11:30
Subject: Necron Lord Awakening
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Blood-Raging Khorne Berserker
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Damn man! you write very very decently! love it!
Please continue with this very nice story about the Necrons.
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2011/06/13 21:07:35
Subject: Re:Necron Lord Awakening
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Utilizing Careful Highlighting
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lowmanjason wrote: Then out of nowhere, a blinding flash of electricity bolted from his empty hand striking four warriors. The bolt had taken down 3 warriors and caught Planet Lord487.0’s eye. Watching afar from his command post this gave him a new idea.
Can you explain this bit? And forgive my confusion but who`s hand is it? The terminators?
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This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2011/06/13 21:08:37
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2011/06/13 21:25:24
Subject: Necron Lord Awakening
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Irked Necron Immortal
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sorry about that, that would be the SM leader. (edit made) i'm sure you could figure out what kind of charactor he is!!!
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2011/06/13 21:34:23
Subject: Necron Lord Awakening
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Renegade Inquisitor de Marche
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Librarian...
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Dakka Bingo! By Ouze
"You are the best at flying things"-Kanluwen
"Further proof that Purple is a fething brilliant super villain " -KingCracker
"Purp.. Im pretty sure I have a gun than can reach you...."-Nicorex
"That's not really an apocalypse. That's just Europe."-Grakmar
"almost as good as winning free cake at the tea drinking contest for an Englishman." -Reds8n
Seal up your lips and give no words but mum.
Equip, Reload. Do violence.
Watch for Gerry. |
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2011/06/13 21:52:42
Subject: Necron Lord Awakening
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Irked Necron Immortal
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purplefood wrote:Librarian...
Yeay gold star!
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2011/06/13 21:57:12
Subject: Re:Necron Lord Awakening
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Opportunist
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Waouh...
Continue the good work, this is... so necrontyr 
I don't really find the words, sorry, but this is amazing.
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2011/06/13 22:27:39
Subject: Necron Lord Awakening
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Utilizing Careful Highlighting
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Ahh, thanks.
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0030/06/15 07:07:14
Subject: Re:Necron Lord Awakening
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Irked Necron Immortal
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OK SO I HAD TO TWEEK A BIT OF THE STORY TO GO ALONG WITH THE NEW CODEX.
GO TO PAGE 2 TO SEE THE RE-BOOT
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This message was edited 3 times. Last update was at 2011/12/29 21:05:48
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2011/06/15 17:28:47
Subject: Necron Lord Awakening
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Wight Lord with the Sword of Kings
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interresting view, I think.. nicely done!
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2011/06/15 17:34:19
Subject: Necron Lord Awakening
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Renegade Inquisitor de Marche
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The Ultramarines don't have a 13th company...
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Dakka Bingo! By Ouze
"You are the best at flying things"-Kanluwen
"Further proof that Purple is a fething brilliant super villain " -KingCracker
"Purp.. Im pretty sure I have a gun than can reach you...."-Nicorex
"That's not really an apocalypse. That's just Europe."-Grakmar
"almost as good as winning free cake at the tea drinking contest for an Englishman." -Reds8n
Seal up your lips and give no words but mum.
Equip, Reload. Do violence.
Watch for Gerry. |
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2011/06/15 17:53:24
Subject: Necron Lord Awakening
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Irked Necron Immortal
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purplefood wrote:The Ultramarines don't have a 13th company...
hehe, nope not any more...
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2011/06/15 17:56:29
Subject: Necron Lord Awakening
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Renegade Inquisitor de Marche
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lowmanjason wrote:purplefood wrote:The Ultramarines don't have a 13th company...
hehe, nope not any more...
Okay then...
The Ultramarine chapter never had a 13th company...
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Dakka Bingo! By Ouze
"You are the best at flying things"-Kanluwen
"Further proof that Purple is a fething brilliant super villain " -KingCracker
"Purp.. Im pretty sure I have a gun than can reach you...."-Nicorex
"That's not really an apocalypse. That's just Europe."-Grakmar
"almost as good as winning free cake at the tea drinking contest for an Englishman." -Reds8n
Seal up your lips and give no words but mum.
Equip, Reload. Do violence.
Watch for Gerry. |
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2011/06/15 18:02:13
Subject: Necron Lord Awakening
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Irked Necron Immortal
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lol... who wrote this story me or some GW punk?
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2011/06/15 18:06:04
Subject: Necron Lord Awakening
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Renegade Inquisitor de Marche
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Most people like to keep their own stuff within line with GW stuff...
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Dakka Bingo! By Ouze
"You are the best at flying things"-Kanluwen
"Further proof that Purple is a fething brilliant super villain " -KingCracker
"Purp.. Im pretty sure I have a gun than can reach you...."-Nicorex
"That's not really an apocalypse. That's just Europe."-Grakmar
"almost as good as winning free cake at the tea drinking contest for an Englishman." -Reds8n
Seal up your lips and give no words but mum.
Equip, Reload. Do violence.
Watch for Gerry. |
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2011/06/15 18:09:44
Subject: Necron Lord Awakening
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Irked Necron Immortal
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it is in lline with GW stuff, its a made up lord and a made up company within to factions that exist in the GW world. if i had to stick with strictly what was in the codex and other fluff, the necrons would take over the univers and some how the ultramarines would claim victory for it!
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This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2011/06/15 18:10:16
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2011/06/15 18:09:46
Subject: Necron Lord Awakening
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Wight Lord with the Sword of Kings
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most do.
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2011/06/15 23:39:15
Subject: Necron Lord Awakening
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Bane Thrall
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Jesus this gets better every time, keep going at it! i love it so far!
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They stare into your soul.
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2011/06/17 19:40:30
Subject: Re:Necron Lord Awakening
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One Canoptek Scarab in a Swarm
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I do like what's written. Thanks for that. I have some minor fluff quibbles. Pariahs are soulless. I never figured soullessness to be a result of their creation, but rather one of their original ingredients. Take one soulless human, add some necron technology and you end up with a Pariah. Getting their hands on a soulless human was always a good way to set up for a conflict between the Necrons and the Inquisition. I can accept the idea that there might have been a soulless Ultramarine. But I doubt the whole 13th company was made up of such individuals, especially if serving with a librarian. In the game, Pariahs cannot teleport, since they are not Necrons. Personally, I never liked that restriction, but just a thought if you want to be strict on yourself. In your narrative, I was assuming your Pariah was teleported to the field of battle. He could have been riding in a Monolith though. Just to be clear, these aren't complaints. Just my point of view.
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