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Hey this is my first entry to a local GW store in kensington and ive used a terminator librarian (slightly converted) from the blood angels chapter.
Your thoughts

It looks good but it is difficult to tell because your photos are either too dark, overexposed or blurred. Try a plain light background, and make sure the light is even.
Otherwise well done! It is probably still better than I could have done!

Yeah ill try that cos ive got to say i have got a serious lack of camera training!

Firstly, Welcome to Dakka!

From what I can tell, it looks good. But that is also a very difficult call seeing the quality of these pictures. Natural outdoor light or just nice even indoor lighting would make it a lot better.
My biggest concern for this model would be how you attached the wing to the staff, and I can't see how you did it with these pictures, so can offer no real suggestions / criticism until we have some pictures that do the model justice

Sorry guys i just let the guys at the shop have my model for the competition
btw for the wing i used green stuff