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Hey guys, not sure if this is the right place to put this, but this is my entry for the Beasts of War contest. I'll probably be making a more techy drawing to go with it, as this is pretty messy and unclear. For the tentacles, think Doc Oc with slicey bits at the end

Let me know what you think!

Its a nice one, but from here it dont show much of what you are composing. Dont want to sound harsh (the picture is great and i really liked it, and would never do something near it), but it just sound like a Necron Lord with some tentacles.


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Oh, but i loved the art work...

Once again, great sketches from yourself. I don't think it's striking enough though.

What about doing away with his arms?

If he has that many tentacles why would he need arms?

Perhaps have a torso/head in a somewhat robotic cocoon/throne, with the tentacles coming out of the bottom/lsides.

Like a cuttlefish...

He has a fat head. Still scary though.

Ugh, wish I could actually use my tablet to make something as awesome as that. I can't even grasp how to give something that much atmosphere. I love the concept man, however, the head needs a bit of adjusting.

I agree the bottom of the head needs to be bigger :/