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Hello

I wrote this last year at the height of my World Eater blood lust!

I think I've done a decent job. If I have one criticism of my story it's generally the way I've portrayed the summoning ritual.

Take a look, I hope you enjoy it. The piece is 8000+ words but I hope you find it worth your efforts to read.

I've had to put it into an attachment as using the copy and paste throws all the paragraphs out of line.

Great read! It's interesting to note that not all World Eaters (or Khorne Berzerkers) are slobbering maniacs and actually have room for independent thought. Then again, seems Blayd still is a bit of a slobbering maniac while in the thick of things, anyway.

Thanks for the positive comments. I kind of wanted him to maintain that blood lust fury and still have some character for people to recognise. If he had just been a rage monster throughout it would have been difficult to express any kind of though process you know?

I like it, it was really nice espescially like how they summoned the daemons more please!

Thanks Willhman. May take some time but if I do I'll add it here.

No prob so excited cant wait!!!!!

sweet! so episode 2, blayd has got to rip kossolax a new one. its gonna be brutal.

No has to be against orks or tyranids!!!!! epic chaos vs xenos fight!!!