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Made in us
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These are my Dark Eldar, so far just have the squad of warriors done, working on Wyches.

The scheme is inspired by someones scheme on these forums that I saw once. Although slightly different. I am looking for any constructive criticism.

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Blood Angel Terminator with Lightning Claws





terra

Cool,i like the whip.


 
   
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Drop Trooper with Demo Charge






Denmark, Vejen

Very nice colour scheme, the gold really compliments the blue, and the purple skin/red har also fits the blue very nicely



 
   
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Storming Storm Guardian




The whip does look cool Good job!

6th Edition Eldar W:15 L:7 D: 1
Eldar with Marine allies 
   
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Stalwart Strike Squad Grey Knight





VERY nice models, all in all!

As far as criticism goes, there are a few things I might recommend. The shading on the whip looks awesome, but I don't feel like the same attention was given to your armor highlights - they're a bit too stark in contrast, and are sharp around the edges. I'd try backing the color down one shade, or better yet, use two colors blended for your highlights. Additionally, the dark blue of your armor looks a bit flat wherever you don't have highlights. To fix this, you might try using a wash or glaze (Devlan Mud, maybe? Or a black base?) before doing your highlights. This might help give some depth and variation to the shadows. The gold on your armor works very well with the blue, but it could use a bit more highlighting on the sharp edges of the upturned blades. Finally, I'd be sure to give the tabard a wash of some kind before painting the bones. Devlan Mud would work here, but I think Gryphonne Sepia might work better. You might actually do a Skull White base on the tabard followed by the wash - that should pull it down to about the color you have now, but with more depth and distinction from the bones.

Honestly, the only color on this I'm not too fond of is the pink highlights, especially on the guns. It kind of works okay with the blue, but becomes somewhat glaring on the gold of the weapons.

Again, GREAT paint job! The detail work is impressive, and the basing is spectacular. Keep it up!

Armies Played: Grey Knights Tyranids Harlequins (WIP) 
   
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Daring Dark Eldar Raider Rider






New Zealand

Very good. Only one problem...

Why would you choose a splinter cannon instead of a darklance???

"Archon Yulliptidon sat apon a throne made of polished glass, which gleamed with magnificence in the rays of the dying suns, beautifully suspended above the the many razor sharp peaks that where Commorragh. The archon held within his hands a a delicate pyramid of sculpted crystal, from which emitted a faint glow, an echo of the soundless screams of pain belonging to countless tortured souls forever trapped within. The room in which the archon sat in was something like a throne room, but displayed apon the walls where helm of every color, but all the same in size and shape. Some bore eagles on their foreheads, and others still contained the decapitated heads of their previous owners. Two huge, beautifully carved iron double doors, engraved with intricate runes of pain and suffering, opened at the far end of the room, to reveal a tall, elegant dark eldar warrior, clad in armor made from bone and flesh. "lord Yulliptidon, you asked for my presence?" Said the arrival, " to what do I owe the pleasure?". The archon raised his elongated head, skin as pale as a full moon, eyes as vivid as a horrible nightmare. " I did not ask for you, Thrayon, I ordered your presence. Do not think to much for your self, for truly, you are not much past a feral that one would find on the streets. As for why I have ordered you to my palace, it is because their is a task that I wish you to preform. I wish you and you kabal to cleanse the imperial out fort of Sargosain Gastienagan." Thrayon was both aghast and interested at what the archon had just said. "Such a task would stretch my kabal to its limits, only a great reward would be enough to do a deed like this." Yulliptidon was outraged by the the proposal of a "great reward" by Thrayon, but did not let his anger show, hiding it with a cold smile that hid his evil intentions surprisingly well. The archon was was famous for never telling a lie in his life, but was very fond of veiled double speak, and this was no exception. "Do not worry, Thrayon, you shall receive what you deserve." Thrayon, happy with this outcome, left to carry out Yulliptidons task. Little did he know what was coming. Thrayon had done a thousand evil deeds, and what he deserved was a horrible death equal to to all those he had caused. Yulliptidons smiled. He was going to have fun."

 
   
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Archon Tobias wrote:Very good. Only one problem...

Why would you choose a splinter cannon instead of a darklance???


really? 6 heavy, 4 assault?

i guess it depends on what you want to do with the squad...

and with mine i want to kill more troops. not tanks so

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