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Student Curious About Xenos





UK

Hey,

This is an inquisitorial dreadnought for an upcoming army. Thoughts and feedback are apreciated.

Cheers
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Bounding Ultramarine Assault Trooper




Chandler, Arizona

Looks rather plain TBH. Now, this doesn't mean its not a great platform to improve upon. It will look very cool if you work on it, and its a great start.

What colors are you currently using for this?

I would recommend doing some "edge highlighting", make the edges of the brass/gold shine. Tops of the rivets would use it as well. Also try drilling the extra barrels on the assault cannon, adds to the detail(this is a personal preference). The warheads on the missiles could use some color as well. Lots of minor details could use shading, and highlighting. Just my observations. Keep it up!


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Looking at it again, maybe its just the picture, but it looks like you did some highlighting. I would try going a little bit brighter, more contrasting against the current color scheme.

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Nurgle Predator Driver with an Infestation





Blackwood, Wales

All I can really say is...




On a serious note, really nice blingin' dread!

 
   
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Near Golden Daemon Caliber






Illinois

It is a little plain, but i think fairly solid overall. I second the assault cannon barrels, black dots work too but personal preference is drill.

Not sure why, but I think he would be really good platform for some battle damage, some scuffs and scrapes. My own bronze guys are scraped down to a silver bare metal where they've been hit and damaged, but could be done with brighter gold and black too.

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Perturbed Blood Angel Tactical Marine





UK

I like him I would add some text to the seal and the scroll on the front.

Good job bud

 
   
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Boosting Ultramarine Biker




Illinois, USA

I'm in the "a bit plain" camp. I agree, the painting is a solid job, and it looks like you did edge high light. But it's a little monochrome. I would, if it were me, work in the Inquisitions colors, red and black, somewhere on the armor. Some prominent splashes of non-metallic color will actually make the metallics pop more. Also the cables running to/from the sarcophagus should be various non-metallic colors as well. I'm not a big stickler about drilling gun barrels, but I am about mold lines. They detract from a good paint job in a big way. File them off, and fill seams with liquid green stuff. It makes a huge difference.
   
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Looking good but I think a fine edge highlight of silver would improve it.
   
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Mauleed





Scotland.

Looks pretty awesome.

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Student Curious About Xenos





UK

ill improve it a bit with more detail thx for all the replies

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Student Curious About Xenos





UK

Here it is after a bit of working on (hilighting and details) What do you guys think? I dont like the blue wires so may change them
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Student Curious About Xenos





UK

And a WIP coteaz!
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