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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/04/18 22:32:26
Subject: Grey Knight Justicar
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Psychic Prisoner aboard a Black Ship
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Well, I'm finally going to do somthing I've dreaded doing, and that is submit one of my models for feedback. Well, heres my justicar, one of the best paintjobs I've done. I've only been playing since July and have never done modeling so yeah, I'm new to the hobby. Please, leave constructive feedback, no THATS HORRIBLE TAKE A LIGHTER TO HIM, stuff. I'm open for advice and new ideas, thats why I'm doing this
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/04/18 23:20:14
Subject: Re:Grey Knight Justicar
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Bounding Assault Marine
East Bay, USA
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It's hard to see it well due to the angle and distance of the camera, but I would hit the armor with a black wash and then re-apply the metal color you used to the raised areas.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/04/18 23:23:49
Subject: Grey Knight Justicar
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Morphing Obliterator
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Very nice. The armour could do with some shading as mentioned above. Other than that an excellent job
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/04/19 00:25:23
Subject: Re:Grey Knight Justicar
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Psychic Prisoner aboard a Black Ship
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Oh more of along the lines of what I did with my Apothecary?
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/04/19 00:47:16
Subject: Grey Knight Justicar
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Jealous that Horus is Warmaster
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Shade your cloth bits like the tabard. Hit it with a wash and build up lighter colors while leaving the darker colors in the recesses
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/04/19 02:04:44
Subject: Grey Knight Justicar
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Boosting Ultramarine Biker
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That Apothecary is great.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/04/19 18:38:12
Subject: Grey Knight Justicar
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Outraged Witness
Right behind you
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I like what you did with the blood on the justicar
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This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2013/04/19 18:38:27
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/04/20 22:25:24
Subject: Grey Knight Justicar
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[MOD]
Making Stuff
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Yeah, could definitely do with a black wash over the armour and some shading on the tabard. Your apothecary's armour is perfect.
The base needs to be a stronger contrast to the model as well... Medium grey base and boltgun metal model just tends to blur together. For the quick and easy option if you want to stick with the grey base, just run a brown wash over it to give it a different base tone to the armour.
Looks like you're off to a good start, though.
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