looking really good for on the road! your pictures aren't the greatest which doesnt help

but other than that really liking the feel.
For the scripts and such, I recommend a fine tip pen. they are fantastic for words and symbols as they dont spread like a brush
Also, have you used any washes? finding it hard to tell. as the robes look like they were blended by hand. Was gona suggest perhaps a wash on the tanks and staff.