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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/10/13 14:09:01
Subject: Imperial Fist Venerable Dreadnought
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Stalwart Space Marine
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Please give feedback and possible inprovements etc.
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You carry the Emperor's will as your torch, with it destroy the shadows.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/10/13 14:36:02
Subject: Re:Imperial Fist Venerable Dreadnought
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Land Raider Pilot on Cruise Control
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I love the paintjob, however he seems a bit mild and laid back......maybe putting him a more dynamic pose would do him more justice. Stay Classy - Feasible
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Grey Templar wrote:
The Riptide can't be a giant death robot, its completely lacking a sword or massive chainsaw. All giant death robots have swords or massive chainsaws. |
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/10/13 14:48:17
Subject: Imperial Fist Venerable Dreadnought
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Lord of the Fleet
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Also, it would be best to remove the mould lines as well.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/10/13 14:54:10
Subject: Imperial Fist Venerable Dreadnought
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Cosmic Joe
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Very cool.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/10/13 16:04:18
Subject: Re:Imperial Fist Venerable Dreadnought
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Dipping With Wood Stain
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Even though it looks like you are going for a "dirty" or battle worn look the yellows could use a bit more highlighting.
It's a good start. Look forward to seeing more.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/10/13 16:07:03
Subject: Re:Imperial Fist Venerable Dreadnought
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Perfect Shot Black Templar Predator Pilot
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Mould lines, and the script on the sarcophagus needs work. Those are the two biggest things for me
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