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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/10/19 19:39:25
Subject: Tau Riptide
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Human Auxiliary to the Empire
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First time posting, so here's the riptide I have painted recently. Any feedback welcomed!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/10/19 21:02:42
Subject: Tau Riptide
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Longtime Dakkanaut
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Solid effort on such a large model. If I were you, I would go back over the glowing blue parts with an even brighter blue. Especially concentrated in the middle of the glowing parts. The paint job still looks good though, a little more attention and details on the base may go a long way too.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/10/21 16:06:03
Subject: Tau Riptide
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Blood-Raging Khorne Berserker
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Wow, this is great. Really clean. Very well done.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/10/21 20:46:50
Subject: Tau Riptide
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Waaagh! Warbiker
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Really nice mate, you gonna do anything else to that base?
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/10/22 02:06:35
Subject: Tau Riptide
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Unhealthy Competition With Other Legions
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Very clean and well done, however I have to point out that the OSL is a bit off, the front to me seems like an intake and I wouldn't think of it having a glow, however if it did, your lighting is just slightly off, the hard edge around the vent is going to create a shadow and force the light outward (away from the vent) rather than allow it to bleed back onto the top and sides of the backpack. Same with the "Exhaust" in the rear, more like the sides of the Ion Cannon actually.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/10/22 18:22:58
Subject: Tau Riptide
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Human Auxiliary to the Empire
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I don't know, might if I have the time.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/10/22 18:29:10
Subject: Re:Tau Riptide
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Bounding Ultramarine Assault Trooper
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Not bad dude water down your paints slightly more, your lines will improve the more you do them. Also what others have mentioned above give the glow effect a little more flare highlight them one more time.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/10/22 18:35:02
Subject: Re:Tau Riptide
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Sneaky Striking Scorpion
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The colors are solid, and well contained, none of them bleed into one another or anything like that. But when you are applying a single color to a large surface it will actually exaggerate any imperfections on the surface itself. This makes your mold lines look very stark and apparent. I would suggest that it's worth going back and removing those lines and re-painting that area afterwords.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/10/23 20:40:38
Subject: Tau Riptide
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Deadly Dark Eldar Warrior
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I know from experience that this model takes time and alot of patience. I painted and magnetized three of them. Automatically Appended Next Post: Great paint job by the way.
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This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2013/10/23 20:41:06
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