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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2014/09/10 03:42:12
Subject: Black Legion Daemon Prince
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Blood-Raging Khorne Berserker
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Here's my attempt at a Black Legion Daemon Prince. I'm by no means a fantastic painter, but I'm pretty happy with this. It's my first "fully finished" model, that includes a proper base.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2014/09/10 03:59:41
Subject: Re:Black Legion Daemon Prince
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I feel like his eyes should be more glowy, but then again I'm addicted to OSL in all my models so that might just be my problem. Other than that I like it it may not be the most technically done model but It yells grim dark and you can't go wrong with that.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2014/09/10 05:20:35
Subject: Re:Black Legion Daemon Prince
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Warning From Magnus? Not Listening!
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Bi'ios, for a first finished model this is very well done. Congrats! As for some constructive criticism, I have a couple of comments. First, whenever you take pictures, I would recommend that you set up a simple background. Something like an open sketch book or sheets of white paper (something to make the background and under the model a solid color) really helps the model pop and lets people see the model clearly. Trust me, you'll get a lot more comments if people can see everything well. Second, I think adding some more contrast for the next model would really help. You have black skin, black armor, and a mostly black base. It blends together a bit too much. Changing one of the three would really help bring the model out. Something like using a light grey (example concrete, if you want to keep the urban theme) for the base or changing the skin color to a dark red or bronze. I hope these are helpful. And please don't take these are criticisms.
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This message was edited 2 times. Last update was at 2014/09/10 05:21:14
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2014/09/10 05:42:03
Subject: Black Legion Daemon Prince
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Blood-Raging Khorne Berserker
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Thanks for the comments. I'm always open to suggestions and critique. I'm trying to improve, after all. I think a bit more contrast would help to make it "pop" a little more, and putting together a proper set to take pics in is fairly high on the priority list.
I just got this guy in the mail yesterday, and was really excited to do it. I like the daemon prince model a lot, and I was trying to go for a simple, but effective paint job. For painting the skin, I wanted to keep him dark, so I just gave him a drybrushing of gray over the black. I'm likely going to get a second one, and apply some lessons learned here.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2014/09/10 09:06:44
Subject: Black Legion Daemon Prince
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Is 'Eavy Metal Calling?
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Looks plenty good to me, I'd be happy to see this across the table from me. If this is your first mini, then you're off to a great start!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2014/09/10 14:51:33
Subject: Black Legion Daemon Prince
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Warning From Magnus? Not Listening!
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Bi'ios wrote:Thanks for the comments. I'm always open to suggestions and critique. I'm trying to improve, after all. I think a bit more contrast would help to make it "pop" a little more, and putting together a proper set to take pics in is fairly high on the priority list.
I just got this guy in the mail yesterday, and was really excited to do it. I like the daemon prince model a lot, and I was trying to go for a simple, but effective paint job. For painting the skin, I wanted to keep him dark, so I just gave him a drybrushing of gray over the black. I'm likely going to get a second one, and apply some lessons learned here.
For a one day paint job, this is great! One idea I just though of would be to paint the skin between the wings a very light grey (like its half-transparent). That would be a way to add color without changing the dark skin tone.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2014/09/10 15:11:05
Subject: Re:Black Legion Daemon Prince
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Sneaky Kommando
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I like it a lot, always lovely to have painted and based models
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2014/09/13 05:32:20
Subject: Re:Black Legion Daemon Prince
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Dakka Veteran
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Very nice looking Daemon Prince
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2014/09/13 05:36:59
Subject: Black Legion Daemon Prince
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Blood Angel Terminator with Lightning Claws
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I like it! Nice work!
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