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Made in us
Regular Dakkanaut





A character for our game that is comic relief. Things like "fear my ancient runes of power!!!"

Player: "bartok..... that's a smiley face...."
Bartok: "an ancient draconic smiley face... of power?"
Player: "no."

As an example. This figure is my wifes first real attempt, and she would like critique and feedback. Be honest, she has a bachelors in art... she can take it.
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This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2015/07/05 14:50:13


 
   
Made in us
Poxed Plague Monk





There's a couple of moldlines that need removing (hands and on the head of the staff).
A quick flesh wash on the hands and face.
And seal with a flat varnish to bring the shiny finish down.

Cats are like greatness, Some achieve cats and some have cats thrust upon them.
William H. A. Carr
Cats are intended to teach us that not everything in nature has a function.
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Decrepit Dakkanaut





Nottinghamshire

I like the chosen colours very much. As above, a wash on the face would really help, just to give some features to it.


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Made in us
Regular Dakkanaut





Feedback appreciated! We will be posting more of her work soon.
   
 
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