I like how you mounted lascannons under the wings

That is cool.
Personally, I'm not a fan of fully assembling the stormraven before painting -- I think it makes it nigh impossible to get all the details -- especially if you've opened both doors, you need to have the inside at least somewhat painted, since it will be visible from the side.
A suggestion on the fiddly canopy bits -- you can see that they're glued not quite level with the canopy on the larger, front one (can't tell with the back one with the glare) -- glue it in place first, paint it, and THEN put the clear piece in place.
I painted something along the same idea with a gunner on the side door -- I chose to face the gunner forward rather than the side, to give the vehicle more of a sense of motion (moving forward):